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EternalSolitude
EternalSolitudeLv41yr
2023-08-26 04:26

I'm a bit late, cuz I read it like months ago, but here we are. First of all, the mc makes good rational decisions, but still makes a few mistakes. He is op in his own way, but he can't just overpower the universe at the start. He will become the strongest, cuz he is the heir of the former strongest. Power System is interesting and has a unique touch, although it has a similiar concept like others. The characters are interesting and develop good through the novel. The Fml is kinda cool and unique. The suppossed Fml is worked out, with a cliche, but both don't appear very often. Update Stability is good I think World Background is very good and it's a cool conceptI would say it's a good novel in general and kind of unique. My only complaint is a personal thing. Don't read further if you don't want spoiler. Spoiler: I dropped it, cuz I couldn't bear how the author did the cringy romance part between the leader of the new humans and the suppossed fml (from the race with woman are top and man are like slaves). Sry author for this, but I can't read further with this thing. I tried to restart multiple times, but I just can't stand that. Not only this scene, but then also how he is together with her. It's just my personal opinion. Keep writing. I'm sure you did a good job after I dropped and will complete with a nice ending. Have a good day ✌️

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Arlemit
Arlemit作者

Thanks, for your honest review!

EternalSolitude
EternalSolitudeLv4

No problem, you did a good job with it and till this situation it was one of my favorities and would still be without it. I'm just a person who is easily lost with one (in my eyes) very strange decision by the authors, cuz I don't want to spend my time with something that would annoy me to no end. Great work 👍

Arlemit:Thanks, for your honest review!
EternalSolitude
EternalSolitudeLv4

Ah thats the name I think. Eh I stopped where the human leader (new ones, like the world mc got transported after his completely first world) asked I think it's Erza, but I don't know the names, out for a date if he wins a battle against her. Mc is together with the crazy double persona girl (the one where he got stuck with in this other dimension or so. I don't remember it so good), atleast until I read. Until I read Mc wasn't together with, I think, Erza

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Romance_guy
Romance_guyLv14

Did you drop greatest sinner

Arlemit:Thanks, for your honest review!
Dragon912
Dragon912Lv2

Gisle challenges her to a fight and if he won they’d go on a date. He wins and from wat was portrayed in the chapter Ezra finally gave up on the mc, I stopped reading at about the “awakening” arc and at that point those two hadn’t shown up again.╮༼ • ʖ̯ • ༽╭ and from skimming ahead I don’t think they’re gonna be brought back til the end of the novel at the rate its going

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Syphilitis
SyphilitisLv15

Okay review time 560 chapters, i criticized this novel hard at first and Absolutely thought it was trash tier. writing quality was Horrible and alot of things just didnt add up. also if he needed it then he magically stumbles across it by the end of the chapter. Alot of useless chapters about rnadom characters or several drawn out info dumps because the chapters are so small you may end up with 5 straight chapters that you can pretty much skip if you wanted. Now this is where things change. every 10 chapters you can see obvious improvement so i continued to read. i enjoyed seeing the author gradually fix the mistakes and planning ahead. now mc mindset doesnt alter too much but it does change a little from influence around him but its not a 180 hero of justice all of a sudden, dude is still ruthless. i have to say the romance is absolutely sudden and didnt care for it at all with the main chick E** and just find it god awful honestly was hoping she would die off but E*** on the otherhand was way more drawn out and makes more sense throughout the story and seems like the right way to go kinda like he learned what it should be but couldnt fix it so tried again (atleast my opinion of course). there stays grammar mistakes but just a bunch of tiny things and very well eligible. the power concept is interesting and well done but here is my issue its not his original power, he doesnt forge a path with a unique soul even tho it is “unique” because turns out the strongest in the world had it first and he is just an heir to it. it gets old with the whole “im an heir to the strongest or i turn out to be the reincarnation of the strongest and i unlock my memories and blah blah blah.” After binging it in 3 days, I believe it has ALOT of potential in the later chapters and definitely has a good mystery to it and leaves you wanting the big answers and worth reading if you can struggle past the beginning, 7/10.

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