Item: My Girlfriend is an S-Class Adventurer
Rating: 4.8

SpaceTime_OverlordLv52yr

2021-11-23 22:41

The story seems very interesting (I read up to the 22nd chapter). It is a shame that sometimes the author uses the wrong pronouns and other similar mistakes, but it's still readable.

My Girlfriend is an S-Class Adventurer

NandoFalske

4.8

418 Chs

Liked by 5 people

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