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NandoFalske
NandoFalskeAuthor2yr
2022-01-19 06:51

Just dropping by to give every author the classic 5 stars! This is my first time writing a big, long novel, so I do my best to plan the script, the characters, the consequences of the MC's actions, and everything else. I hope you enjoy it! I am not a Native English speaker. So, of course you will find some grammatical errors and when you spot one, let me know through the comments tool and as soon as possible I will correct it. Also feel free to use the comments on this review to ask questions. Enjoy your reading!

My Girlfriend is an S-Class Adventurer

NandoFalske
4.8
418 Chs

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Blood_Fang
Blood_FangLv3

SAO right? I'm talking about the thing I'm commenting about

2yr
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Rocky_Boy_5885
Rocky_Boy_5885Lv1

My only question is, is the main female character a yandere?

2yr
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NandoFalske
NandoFalskeAuthor

No

Rocky_Boy_5885:My only question is, is the main female character a yandere?
2yr
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E7yx
E7yxLv15

so the title is my S class girlfriend but 5 chaps in...there isnt even a clue of her and also in the description there is nothing avout a girl...title misleading or still getting there?

2yr
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NandoFalske
NandoFalskeAuthor

End of Volume 1

E7yx:so the title is my S class girlfriend but 5 chaps in...there isnt even a clue of her and also in the description there is nothing avout a girl...title misleading or still getting there?
2yr
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Ttsfih
TtsfihLv4

So this girlfriend is Ayumi?

NandoFalske:End of Volume 1
2yr
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NandoFalske
NandoFalskeAuthor

Ayumi appears as early as chapter 3, so that's another one. Ayumi is not an adventurer, just a noblewoman.

Ttsfih:So this girlfriend is Ayumi?
2yr
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Preyz_Jr
Preyz_JrLv2

I thought ayumi is also an adventurer? or former and now a noblewoman?

NandoFalske:Ayumi appears as early as chapter 3, so that's another one. Ayumi is not an adventurer, just a noblewoman.
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2yr
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NandoFalske
NandoFalskeAuthor

Her past is explained later in the story, because the protagonist ends up getting interested. But no, she is not the S-Class.

Preyz_Jr:I thought ayumi is also an adventurer? or former and now a noblewoman?
2yr
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Deku_Deku_3204
Deku_Deku_3204Lv3

Hey author san, i need the sauce bruh, she looking fine, bottomless but wearing a bra, nice.

2yr
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NandoFalske
NandoFalskeAuthor

From the cover? It's an artwork I found on Russian sites

Deku_Deku_3204:Hey author san, i need the sauce bruh, she looking fine, bottomless but wearing a bra, nice.
2yr
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Phenomenon_Empire
Phenomenon_EmpireLv4

So the S-class is Alexis?

NandoFalske:End of Volume 1
2yr
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NandoFalske
NandoFalskeAuthor

** Spoiler alert ** Yes, this is mentioned in the course of volume 2.

Phenomenon_Empire:So the S-class is Alexis?
2yr
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as1804
as1804Lv13

I just want to know wether at the end he ended up picking only 1 woman or its a harem ending?

2yr
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NandoFalske
NandoFalskeAuthor

Details of the ending will not be disclosed

as1804:I just want to know wether at the end he ended up picking only 1 woman or its a harem ending?
2yr
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jwhbsrinvfriygrf
jwhbsrinvfriygrfLv4

Yup

Blood_Fang:SAO right? I'm talking about the thing I'm commenting about
2yr
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Canican
CanicanLv3

I'm sorry bro, I can't read it because there is no translation anymore, every time a new episode comes out, it hurts me, I take this series off my list.

2yr
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NandoFalske
NandoFalskeAuthor

Oh, I am really sad about that. As a user of the translation tool, I was also very disappointed by the change in the site

Canican:I'm sorry bro, I can't read it because there is no translation anymore, every time a new episode comes out, it hurts me, I take this series off my list.
2yr
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Daoist_Culture
Daoist_CultureLv15

Hmm, tbh i dont know what i true. The harem tag or your answer about the ending. If there is a harem tag, i assume that there will be harem at the end, so why not confirm it? Since tags says so. Im a cultured guy and got baited by the cover...really nice cover😎. Im asking cuz i checked some chapters and scrolled the names, to find some lemons. But u did not see any, i checked like 80 chaps or smth. This is harem version without lemons? Hope you can give me some info😁 Thanks!

2yr
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Skasha_
Skasha_Lv2

Daoist_Culture:Hmm, tbh i dont know what i true. The harem tag or your answer about the ending. If there is a harem tag, i assume that there will be harem at the end, so why not confirm it? Since tags says so. Im a cultured guy and got baited by the cover...really nice cover😎. Im asking cuz i checked some chapters and scrolled the names, to find some lemons. But u did not see any, i checked like 80 chaps or smth. This is harem version without lemons? Hope you can give me some info😁 Thanks!
2yr
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