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ayrayy
ayrayyLv42yr
2022-08-08 02:54

this story has a potential but unfortunately it collapsed on the end. the story was too rushed, it has many unsolved issues. is the author not guilty for leaving us like this? the story's concept was really nice, but i guess i expected too much. i really can't explain how disappointed i am right now. i was expecting to see Lu Bei finally accepting the fl as her stepmother. i was expecting to read some wholesome mother and son moments. and i wanted to see Lu Bei and his father finally communicating properly with each other. the conflict of the story was not even solved and the author just put the story to an end. sigh, i don't recommend reading this book.

I Became the Male Lead's Stepmother After Transmigrating

Little Garden
4.4
170 Chs

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OkayCoco
OkayCocoLv11

I understand you too well, i felt the same ……but I kinda thought again, maybe somethings are better left unsaid, and some things must be left to our imagination .

2yr
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ayrayy
ayrayyLv4

this saying is indeed good, but i think this doesn't apply for this story bc that saying can only be applied if the details that weren't mentioned does not affect the plot. But in this story, the information that was lacking was important to the plot that is why i think your choice of words were, no offense, incorrect 🥰

OkayCoco:I understand you too well, i felt the same ……but I kinda thought again, maybe somethings are better left unsaid, and some things must be left to our imagination .
2yr
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OkayCoco
OkayCocoLv11

My bad :)

ayrayy:this saying is indeed good, but i think this doesn't apply for this story bc that saying can only be applied if the details that weren't mentioned does not affect the plot. But in this story, the information that was lacking was important to the plot that is why i think your choice of words were, no offense, incorrect 🥰
2yr
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Riddles_Wife
Riddles_WifeLv4

You can find it in mtl it’s called “Transmigrated as the Stepmother of the Male Protagonist in a Campus Story” though the names are different.

2yr

RatselRiya
RatselRiyaLv5

just loved it😘😘....reading the synopsis and title, i really want to read the story🥰🥰...just awesome👌🏻👌🏻...waiting for it to get picked[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]......

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trick_or_treat
trick_or_treatLv6

If anyone knows the raws or any spoilers do let me know~ Can‘t wait to see the interactions b/w the 3 😂 Maybe they will have a cute daughter too, who knows 🙏😏

3yr
Orainfourteen
OrainfourteenLv5

Why is sooo short ? I need more story about them.. I thought the ending is a lil bit rushed.. Cz some question about the notebook, how she transmigration it's leave unanswered.. But i enjoyed this novel very much and can't bear to part

2yr
luhluh19
luhluh19Lv15

15 chapters in and... nothing.. nothing interesting, No story line, No drama. Nothing just a bunch of random events with no explanation and a boring cold step son and father who barley even exist.

2yr
Elizabeth_Serafim
Elizabeth_SerafimLv3

I tried but I couldn't like the protagonist of this story. Maybe it's my sentimental "I" speaking...but I think the character lacks empathy. She doesn't see anything around her but herself. In her mind she is the only real one, while the others are characters in a book, so for her it's not worth the approach, or what happens to them. Yes, she is special. It came to a world created in a book , so far I understand ... But in the world of the book those people are real with pain and joy . So his behavior made me feel bad, especially for the teenager. ( well that is my opinion , i expected something different ... anyway , maybe other people liked it 🙃)

2yr
XiaoNiLovesTea
XiaoNiLovesTeaLv15

This is an easy, relatively short and sweet read with the caveat that it wrapped up very suddenly and left a number of foundational questions unanswered. The male lead and the stepson's characters and the female lead's interactions with them as a mediator were a refreshing shift of focus from many other stories in this genre. I also enjoyed that there was no "handoff" upon transmigration and so our female lead had to figure out the world and her relationships with others on the go. With that said, I find it hard to recommend for two reasons: the female lead's character feels somewhat shallowly developed, and the ending is quite rushed. Despite 170 chapters we never really get a sense of the lead's actual goals/interests, apart from making money. She lacks the curiosity and empathy that I would normally expect to find in such stories, and this made it hard to like her at many points throughout the story because it took a very, very long time to develop meaningful relationships with her husband and stepson. (In contrast, we are told she rapidly befriends minor characters like a teacher, a neighbor, etc.) The other issue is that there were a bunch of somewhat important unanswered questions because it looks like the author dropped the story--so we get hints of a more complicated background story for the female lead and a complex reason for why she got married to the male lead, but they are both really unexplored and the ending thus feels very abrupt.

2yr
Aafy
AafyLv15

I am heart broken. This novel has been dropped by the author i was really enjoying this novel. it's quite different from the one usually on the app plus their was so much potential for this story to grow Hopefully the author would pick it up again and continue this story

2yr
MyShell
MyShellLv14

Initially, I wanted to give 5 stars all around, but due to its rushed and incomplete ending I could not. I was totally invested in the progress and was hoping for closure and finding out the fl true identity. that never happened. this was a beautiful story with lots of potential, however the abrupt ending made me feel annoyed. too many questions were left unanswered.

2yr
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