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2022-04-10 11:19

1. Writing quality is bearable. 2. Story development is very forced. Every passive skills become useful with no setup in the next sentence. He would be peaceful for 3 months, gain a battle skill, and a conflict will arrise out of nowhere in the next sentence. 3. The MC is dumb. Sometimes having a dumb MC can be fun in a comedy. The problem is that this story tries to be dark. This makes the MC just frustrating. The only reason he can survive even a single day is that he got lucky and has a system. Worst of all, the MC is arrogant and thinks that he is smart while making the dumbest actions and statements. 4. Not sure about stability so I gave it a 3 as a middle value. 5. The background is terrible. The sect makes no sense and the rules the author introduces gets broken in the next. He does try to think of a "fresh" twist to a sect so I give 2 stars for effort. The problem is that some archetypes are there for a reason. Sometimes that is just an inevitable outcome of logical progression. An example of this would be greedy and selfish people always being in power as the antagonist. This is inevitable when only those that are greefy and selfish can climb over others to gain the wealth and power they have. Once you try to subvert expectations and break archetypes, it instead just breaks logic. So good attempt but poor execution. Overall it was a poorly executed story with an interesting premise. I would not recommend.

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GrandVoid
GrandVoidLv14

Reread

INnOUT
INnOUTLv13

Did the author rewrite the early chapters?

GrandVoid:Reread
GrandVoid
GrandVoidLv14

I do not know

INnOUT:Did the author rewrite the early chapters?
INnOUT
INnOUTLv13

Then why are you telling me to reread it? I already tried it, and did not like it.

GrandVoid:I do not know
GrandVoid
GrandVoidLv14

Because we dont know, and you could find out. Seems pretty obvious to me.

INnOUT:Then why are you telling me to reread it? I already tried it, and did not like it.
INnOUT
INnOUTLv13

No offense, but you really need help. You saw someone post a very negative review about a book, and decided to tell them to reread it. When they ask why, you literally have no reason. I am just wondering how you function in the real world. To answer your question, no, there was nothing obvious about what you said. There was not even a hint of logic at all.

GrandVoid:Because we dont know, and you could find out. Seems pretty obvious to me.
GrandVoid
GrandVoidLv14

Tell me. Which other reasons are there to reread a novel? And im doing fine irl thank you.

INnOUT:No offense, but you really need help. You saw someone post a very negative review about a book, and decided to tell them to reread it. When they ask why, you literally have no reason. I am just wondering how you function in the real world. To answer your question, no, there was nothing obvious about what you said. There was not even a hint of logic at all.
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the_mighty_blanket
the_mighty_blanketLv13

translation quality is good, the premises is good but the concept of Tri gu sect rule is not gonna work. Even in demonic sect that kind of rule only make their demise faster (unless the sect leader have golden finger). I know the author wanted to use the concept of raising Gu in a pot as sect rule but it just not gonna work with human. Ok say that the higher up did not care about outer disciples at all, that inner disciples can send their people to plunder the sect resources like meat Gu food and than when the Quota is not reached the higher up will punish all the outer disciples(idk maybe kill them and take they Gu to eat or something) that is pure stupidity. Say that if they do that, than sect outer disciples will become less and inturn make the new inner disciple lesser, this will cause a gap in their sect generation compare to other a lil smart(not a lot just a lil bit smart) that have rule slightly good rule to prevent their sect resources go to other place(I.e sell to outside market to fill some people pockets), the said Tri-Gu sect gonna suffer a great lost if their sect enter a war with other sect because of generations gap. That still did not count when they Sect fight with Gu nemesis(phoenix,fire type cultivator) as I remember the author keep saying this is dog eat dog kind of world, it will make more so for other sect to target Tri-Gu sect. That if, if the author care about logic at all. But if He(or she) did not, than... just ignore all my comments above☝🏼🙅🏼🙈

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