INnOUT

You need to improve your reading comprehension.

Even if you assume it's 100% legit. I mean who know, that Nigerian prince swore he would give me 1 trillion dollars if I first send him 10,000. A prince will never lie. Anyway, even if it is legit, you are not even the author. You don't own the IP. You will get sued. There is literally no winning for you.

That doesn't even make sense. It's not like he was chucking up halfcourt shots and making them to win his 1v5. That, you can logically think is luck. You just saw a guy 1v5 your starters and smoke them in every way possible. You don't get lucky with your dribbles, breakthrough, and athleticism. It's like you saw someone run a 9.6 second 100m, and dismiss it as luck or a fluke. Either you have never seen the sport, or you have brain damage. Either way, you should never have been a coach. Anyway. No one sane is saying he should have started. But to not even put him in as a rotation piece, even for the last minute of the half or something to rest his starters, while they are getting blown out is just completely stupid. Most people just endure the stupidity, because it is likely a poor writer's terrible and artificial way to create tension, and they are used to it in here. And considering this is a fanfic, even this is above average.

But with knowledge about you, your abilities, and you past life events as seen through a 3rd person view in movie form? No one with an IQ above 0 is dismissing that as just "crazy". She might think he has insane skill in occlumenency and is tricking her. But no one, least of all a former (or current. can't remember the timeline) auror that is actively participating in a wizard world war against a dark lord, is dismissing him as just "crazy".

"after mastering" that was his practice piece.

Are you calling me AI or agreeing that this novel was written with AI? If it is the former, then you are behind the times. Do you see the grammatical errors I make? AI don't do that anymore. Unless you count autofill as AI, in which case, maybe. If it is the latter. Obviously.

I just saw this reply, so I will respond. I doubt you would even understand, but here goes my attempt to explain. 1. I know there are differences. I stated in my original review that there were differences. I also stated that these changes to the original story add nothing of value to the original story while just introducing inconsistencies and plot holes. 2. If you think "look he uses gets a different flame" is a counter to my argument, then you missed the entire point of my review, which literally only you seem to misunderstand. Even the author seems to get my point. They might not agree whether or not the minor changes they introduce are positive or negative, but even the author agrees that the endpoints are the same. It's the same thing with the single different flame. Instead of accelerating the pace of gathering new flames and exploring how that early snowball affects his growth and story, the author just inexplicably goes against the entire character buildup, including his past life, and donates the original flame to a complete stranger. Now we are back to square one with total character assassination and a forced plot with a weird trap that just did not make any sense given his background. To explain in simple terms: Original goes (A-B-C-D-E) with logical decisions and logical outcomes, while this one goes (A-Z-9-W-C-0-P-*--D%-E) with plot holes, plot conveniences, deus ex machina and character assassination shoved in but actually leading to no tangible change to the original plot line (Which itself makes no sense). 3. As for you saying that this is satisfying and that I am an idiot for not being satisfied, there is really nothing much to say. You are stupid. Anyone who reads that statement will also think that you are stupid. Nothing shows stupidity quite like calling someone an idiot for not liking the same thing you do.

It was pretty decent. The MC is quite bland, but the story does use his absolute power and freedom to explore a lot of the Onepiece world's characters and background plot points. But then the quality just plumetted. I am guessing either the author just started using AI, or the translator is making changes to the original using AI. Either way, it was a decent read while it lasted.

If he doesn't remember a pet that died protecting him, and it requires watching a dog getting killed to remember, he is a psychopath. This author is just terrible at writing. He could have gone with him being reminded of his old dog that he either left behind in his death and gone for the emotional route to hrlp the readers connect to this, as of yet emotionless sociopath of an MC. Or he could have made it due to his current nature as a dog demon and try to turn it into humor or a charqcter quirk. Or literally anything else, even just not mentioning this situation at all. But nope. " Oh yeah. I forgot I had a dog that died to protect me. Watching this dog get mauled to death just reminded me. Oh well." This is not even mentioning how much of a stretch that is in the modern world. There is almost no situation in the modern world where a dog can save one's life by sacrificing itself. And it just so happened to the MC and he forgot about it? Yeah, either this is just 100% AI slop, or the author is just better off using AI slop.

Assuming those aren't weighted training, that's really slow, as in he should be weaker than ninja academy students. Considering the fruit he ate, that's such a waste. There are people in the real world who could complete his training in 2 hours. Granted, if this was in the real world, that would make him an olympic level athelete, but still. He has both chakra and a mythical zoan. At least he should be superhuman.