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Darius_Chromwell
Darius_ChromwellLv43yr
2021-10-04 09:14

Where can i find the prequel for this story because this definitely isn’t the first in the series. 2 chapters in and the Mc is already getting married to Bulma and apparently has a history with her going back to childhood.

Reborn in Dragon Ball with Overhaul Quirk

komega
3.8
37 Chs

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komega
komegaAuthor

I did mention that I would write about his childhood later, right?

3yr
Kyoto_Limberg
Kyoto_LimbergLv2

yes but you dont just make him get married in second chapter with no explanation its as if in chapter two he was already super saiyan blue and you said you would explain in later character it takes a lot of important information that we should know to do this and how are we supposed to feel about he being married with bulma like if it was him being her boyfriend then fine but married is a bit to much to not give us any infomation at all.

komega:I did mention that I would write about his childhood later, right?
3yr
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GodOfThighs
GodOfThighsLv4

When I read the second chapter I dropped it so fast I could barely see my fingers. If all you can write is trash romance why even write it at all.

3yr

dozkiller07
dozkiller07Lv4

for me this is 5 star.not the best fic.but it's better than most. now many will say that mc's power is nerfed. what they mean by that is his overhaul quirk need knowledge for him to create something from nothing. in a way it's a good nerf as if it isn't then that power is broken. anyway he uses his power to change his cells and dna so he will be powerfull. till now he stole dna from saiyan,starfish and high density muscular dinosour and some other space creatures. he is a heck lot strong than many others.so the story or author never nerfed the mc . just think his quirk is like tranfiguration from harrypotter.u need a good knowledge of what u want to create.thaats it.

3yr
AnotherAtlas
AnotherAtlasLv2

There is no romance tag, but there is romance. That's some extra virgin oil. Mc also conveniently knew bulma in childhood. Also, I'm not exactly comfortable he's gonna 'shag' trunks' mom. Personal opinion ofc.

3yr
XxPedroxX
XxPedroxXLv4

Garbage and nerf mcGarbage and nerf mcGarbage and nerf mcGarbage and nerf mcGarbage and nerf mcGarbage and nerf mcGarbage and nerf mcGarbage and nerf mcGarbage and nerf mcGarbage and

3yr
Daoist1JrigW
Daoist1JrigWLv1

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3yr
mikedanger
mikedangerLv5

Well in my humble opinion, of course without offending anyone who thinks differently from my point of view, but also by looking at this matter in a different way and without fighting and by trying to make it clear, and by considering each and everyone's opinion, I honestly believe that I completely forgot what I was going to say.

3yr
_Wessix4Ever
_Wessix4EverLv13

um it's alright so far but I just had to ask are we missing chaps at the start cuz it feels like we were just dropped in and our missing a lot of context with the way he keeps mentioning his childhood

3yr
MythicalFanFicGod
MythicalFanFicGodLv4

I loved the story. Sure, it was never ended properly, but it has a summary at the end to bring some closure to it, and that was nice. Some may love this, others hate it, but even if it was a little rough around the edges with PLs, it was entertaining and clearly well-planned.

9mth
Iterna
IternaLv4

The inconsistency is strong in this one, im okay with nerf overhaul but he didn't wish for biology knowledge when he needs it but instead he wish for magical technique knowledge but don't know the simple transformation tffff it's worth time

2yr
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