In itself the story is ok, the English is pretty bad so some parts, powers, abilities are hard to understand without and explanation. The story itself is very Character driven. like more focused on personal interaction and growing. The style is more in line with your standard Drama than an Action fic, that's not a bad thing but much of what would make it a very good story is just lost in translation. Emotions and reasons don't come across that well in the translation and that makes much of what happens in the first arc very boring and makes little sense. The idea is Good, but overall I'm not a fan of the story development as a whole, is just not my style and feels a bit forced when I think about all this being a whish of the MC to be reincarnated into this world.
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