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2022-04-12 14:06

A nice short story. Surprised not more reviews here. If you want a short fast read this is good to consider. It could be improved on especially some of the wrong pronouns used and some typing errors. I have a feeling that this was translated from another language like Chinese. The author has potential but needs to clear it up some --editing. Characters are good. Not sure about the ending but can understand it.

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