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2021-12-27 10:53

Story was all over the place… the grasp on the English language was not good. So many spelling mistakes and wrong pronouns used. Also uses wrong verb tenses. The book started off well and just went downhill the longer I read. I wanted to like this book but all the spelling mistakes and bad grammar made it hard to enjoy

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