First of all, the grammar has quite a few mistakes but it is somewhat manageable. However the story itself is not too much to my taste and it had way too many inconsistencies in power skills and logical thinking so I will give this I want to store review. And honestly even if the story was good I saw that there are multiple people in here (possibly aliases for the author in different accounts, who knows?...) who posted a five-star review many many times one after the other... So to balance things out I would have felt it is my obligation to post a one-star review anyway...
HolyOniiSama
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贊沒有回復。 來,成為第一個評論的人!