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DidYouReadMyNameLv152yr
2022-05-05 10:43

Okay so I'm only about halfway through what is available to read right now ( chap. 156ish) at this point in the story I have to say it has been very well thought out. No glaring plot holes or inconsistencies. The plot flows from one scenario to another smoothly. Not many grammar errors. So the Mc is a powerful primordial God of destruction who begins to question his and the other gods origins. He decides to destroy the world that he and his family of primordial gods have made to their outrage. He loses the fight to be reborn on the very planet he wanted to destroy and is on a journey to rebuild his strength and have his revenge. If you are down for a dark MC who is meticulous, cunning, ruthless, and merciless this is your novel. The mc has been shown to have a very deep grasp of most situations allowing for a near perfect idea of what would play out allowing him to manipulate most situations to his absolute favor. He also is showing signs of maybe growing as well. Perhaps his time on the world he and his family made will change his outlook a little... or not we shall see .

Primordial Descent

Magecrafter
4.7
303 Chs

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Magecrafter
MagecrafterAuthor

Thanks for this review, truly. You've encapsulated the novel and given such a positive (or rather negative 😈) outlook on the story. I shall continue to improve and write for the sake of these words!

2yr
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Amons
AmonsLv4

Haven't enjoyed a novel as much as this one! Plot is basically trying to get revenge and destroying the world, but it's still very exciting since there's really no guarantee that Void Jesus will actually be able to do so. The characters are very distinct from each other, they've got personalities that stand out from other "similar" novels. Void Jesus does things for his benefit, he doesn't hesitate to kill or maim others. His actions don't stray from how the author wants to portray him as (very cool because that takes a whole lot of skill). So far, the events aren't boring or expected. Characters are very dynamic and consistent. Story is definitely worth the try! :D

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TimVic
TimVicLv15

This is a solid 5/5. I love the way the storyline began. Although I'm not a fan of POV styled stories, this one got me pulled in. Hexarion is an interesting MC. Quite meticulous as well. This is worth reading, I recommend.

2yr
Magecrafter
MagecrafterAuthor

Alright! I'm back after so long. This book is over 200 chapters long now, so it deserves a new review. I'd say it's still a stellar story, just not for everyone. Our Mc is depicted to be an evil person, but just a chapter later he saves someone. Some might drop the book because of that, but if advise you to read on. Also, he sometimes acts or thinks in a weirdly immature or petty way—at least in the beginning chapters. Many would also drop because of this. I'd advise you to keep going, though. Why? Because it's a good story! As you progress further in, you'll realize that the novel is golden. You might have some issues with the MC, Hexarion, but those issues become less glaring at some point. You might even love him eventually. So, yes. This book is still a Five Stars in my book! Thanks for picking up this book, and I hope you have a good read.

1yr
Magecrafter
MagecrafterAuthor

Reveal spoiler

3yr
Master_Of_gu
Master_Of_guLv1

The novel is dropped in chapter 6, the cruel hero and villain that's what the writer is trying to show, he saves the poor fairy from death and tries to justify himself that it's only for the eyes or that it's interesting and not because he's a perverted hero, obvious hypocrisy, no need to lie and justifications just save her without a play

3yr
Magecrafter
MagecrafterAuthor

Give it a try, you just might like it.

3yr
Melissa_Angel
Melissa_AngelLv1

It looks promising, the character gives me an Overlord vibe. Taking your other works into account, I am excited on this one.

3yr
From_Magecrafter
From_MagecrafterLv13

Good piece of work. I love how it's in the first person format. I can really feel his feelings better and it's more relatable. Something tells me those gods aren't as good as they seem tho, or is it just me?

3yr
AR_Baby
AR_BabyLv1

Ride on author. Please update more frequently. Talia is gonna be a mad character I'm sure of it. Let's just wait for character development to kick in. So sear readers or potential ones, you've come to the right place.

3yr
agbolahan_rufai
agbolahan_rufaiLv1

Overall I think it's a good novel, since it's just starting I can only hope for a more stable and wonderful release. It has mad potential though. The other gods and Primordials seem to be the bad guys in my book.

3yr
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