Item: Primordial Descent
Rating: 5
Author: Amons

AmonsLv43yr

2021-11-04 23:55

Haven't enjoyed a novel as much as this one! Plot is basically trying to get revenge and destroying the world, but it's still very exciting since there's really no guarantee that Void Jesus will actually be able to do so. The characters are very distinct from each other, they've got personalities that stand out from other "similar" novels. Void Jesus does things for his benefit, he doesn't hesitate to kill or maim others. His actions don't stray from how the author wants to portray him as (very cool because that takes a whole lot of skill). So far, the events aren't boring or expected. Characters are very dynamic and consistent. Story is definitely worth the try! :D

Primordial Descent

Magecrafter

4.7

303 Chs

Liked by 21 people

Replies12

MagecrafterAuthor

Thanks a lot for your review Amons. That hit deep. I'm very haply you enjoyed the story this much 😁😁😁

3yr

MagecrafterAuthor

Haha, what's with the 'Void Jesus' title tho 😅

3yr

AmonsLv4

No problem! Keep up the great work my dude!

Magecrafter:Thanks a lot for your review Amons. That hit deep. I'm very haply you enjoyed the story this much 😁😁😁

3yr

AmonsLv4

I saw a lot of jesus memes before, so I decided to give him that name LOL

Magecrafter:Haha, what's with the 'Void Jesus' title tho 😅

3yr

Samsara_IconLv14

Is there any sort of romance in this?

2yr

AmonsLv4

It depends on how the story goes. There has been a bit of romance but I won't say any more than that bcus spoilers

Samsara_Icon:Is there any sort of romance in this?

2yr

MagecrafterAuthor

Hahaha. Seeing this after a year makes me happy. Thanks for your support and patience. Finally resuming the book.

2yr

Romance_guyLv14

Will there be romance

Magecrafter:Hahaha. Seeing this after a year makes me happy. Thanks for your support and patience. Finally resuming the book.

1yr

MagecrafterAuthor

Not really. There are romantic subplots concerning side characters, but it's not really tied to the MC. It's also not very relevant to the story

Romance_guy:Will there be romance

1yr

Romance_guyLv14

Did you drop this

Magecrafter:Not really. There are romantic subplots concerning side characters, but it's not really tied to the MC. It's also not very relevant to the story

1yr

MagecrafterAuthor

Nope. I'm thinking of picking resuming uploads soon

Romance_guy:Did you drop this

1yr

TheComedy_MaskLv3

hey author just wanna ask just because the side characters'shave romance doesn't mean they don't die right or have absolute plot armor they do get killed i hope

Magecrafter:Thanks a lot for your review Amons. That hit deep. I'm very haply you enjoyed the story this much 😁😁😁

11mth

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