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Ashton_A
Ashton_ALv112yr
2022-01-05 01:56

I hope talia dies painfully and is unable to be ressurected and no I will never enjoy her presence. However, everything else about the novel is great.

Primordial Descent

Magecrafter
4.7
303 Chs

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Magecrafter
MagecrafterAuthor

Why does everyone think like this 😂🤣 I did make her character come out more in the later chapters... But from what you're saying, you won't even give her a chance. Lol. Thanks for your honest review too. I'm happy you enjoy this work

2yr
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Ashton_A
Ashton_ALv11

She is annoying and her resolve isnt captivating, not that shes badly written. Shes greatly written its just her type of character is always hated. The novel is great though.

Magecrafter:Why does everyone think like this 😂🤣 I did make her character come out more in the later chapters... But from what you're saying, you won't even give her a chance. Lol. Thanks for your honest review too. I'm happy you enjoy this work
2yr
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Magecrafter
MagecrafterAuthor

I see. Thank you, lol. I intentionally designed her that way. Eventually she becomes loved... in a way... Lol

Ashton_A:She is annoying and her resolve isnt captivating, not that shes badly written. Shes greatly written its just her type of character is always hated. The novel is great though.
2yr
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Magecrafter
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Alright! I'm back after so long. This book is over 200 chapters long now, so it deserves a new review. I'd say it's still a stellar story, just not for everyone. Our Mc is depicted to be an evil person, but just a chapter later he saves someone. Some might drop the book because of that, but if advise you to read on. Also, he sometimes acts or thinks in a weirdly immature or petty way—at least in the beginning chapters. Many would also drop because of this. I'd advise you to keep going, though. Why? Because it's a good story! As you progress further in, you'll realize that the novel is golden. You might have some issues with the MC, Hexarion, but those issues become less glaring at some point. You might even love him eventually. So, yes. This book is still a Five Stars in my book! Thanks for picking up this book, and I hope you have a good read.

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Reveal spoiler

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Master_Of_gu
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The novel is dropped in chapter 6, the cruel hero and villain that's what the writer is trying to show, he saves the poor fairy from death and tries to justify himself that it's only for the eyes or that it's interesting and not because he's a perverted hero, obvious hypocrisy, no need to lie and justifications just save her without a play

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Magecrafter
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Give it a try, you just might like it.

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Melissa_Angel
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It looks promising, the character gives me an Overlord vibe. Taking your other works into account, I am excited on this one.

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From_Magecrafter
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Good piece of work. I love how it's in the first person format. I can really feel his feelings better and it's more relatable. Something tells me those gods aren't as good as they seem tho, or is it just me?

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AR_Baby
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Ride on author. Please update more frequently. Talia is gonna be a mad character I'm sure of it. Let's just wait for character development to kick in. So sear readers or potential ones, you've come to the right place.

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agbolahan_rufai
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Overall I think it's a good novel, since it's just starting I can only hope for a more stable and wonderful release. It has mad potential though. The other gods and Primordials seem to be the bad guys in my book.

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