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DetachedDreamer
DetachedDreamerLv143yr
2021-11-10 13:50

no stable ability to update chapters. the last full chapter really cemented who the MC was and thats "weak." now, he's attempted to murder innocent people trying to save the world so he can help his pathetic friend continue down the path of insanity by helping hunt the avatar. think of any character weaker than zuko in the beginning of his arc, who'd want to follow that? spare me the redemption and character growth, the MC had the chance to help but became worst than enabler for him. terrible writing. he just wants a sympathy reason to act evil. where has decent writing gone?

Avatar: The Fire Demon

Sin_O_Sloth
4.3
36 Chs

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Celebiiiiiiiiiiiii
CelebiiiiiiiiiiiiiLv1

I wonder how he’s supposed to become the strongest then… I dislike weak characters and ones that do crazy things for others’ sake

2yr
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Sin_O_Sloth
Sin_O_SlothAuthor

This fanfiction is one of the best I’ve ever read. It is fantastically written and the story is immersive. The author must be both handsome and tall, that’s the only way this fic. could reach so high on the rankings! And while looking good at that!

3yr

Thanatio
ThanatioLv13

We hope for the next update, and we shall pray it is not the last.

3yr
GirakoST
GirakoSTLv2

Dropped????

3yr
HealMeMommy
HealMeMommyLv1

no matter how many times I reread this I still feel the same way...massive disappointment...you introduce thr mc as a half spirit i love that then you ruin it by siding with zuko...he should have chosen a neutral side but leaning towards aang...considering his mother was a spirit and his hate for the fire nation...I think you ruined something good and its a dann shame

2yr
KazuKitoo
KazuKitooLv3

Eu pessoalmente gostei muito da historia, o mc não é alguém particularmente do mal, mas também não é um mc bonzinho que não mata ou perdoa a todos, o que é a da minha preferencia. A historia também se desenvolve bem, (mesmo com alguns time skips) e o mc progride bem em questão de força. Só queria que atualizasse mais rápido -_-

3yr
TheLake22
TheLake22Lv13

Reveal spoiler

2yr
UnrealPollo
UnrealPolloLv2

MaAann.......He is too kind not my ideal Mc But Rest is fine.[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]

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joshgray
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la_nope
la_nopeLv14

"NOT DEAD YET" then died. .

2yr
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