So overall the fanfic isn’t Terrible but it’s mostly the mc himself that ruins it. He ended up getting the fact that he was immortal and a multiversal traveler told to People, all because he put the phoenix force inside Himself, then he doesn’t think to erase their memories of the Event or straight up kill them, as that type of secret should not be Known by other’s yet he just let’s them know and tells them Way more than he should. the mc is honestly pretty stupid and an open book, it doesn’t help that he throws a tantrum every like 2 chapters but doesn’t Really do Anything to change it, there’s also the fact that There is Way to much talking by the mc, like 90% of the chapter’s nothing happens, There’s literally like 5-7 chapters of shopping. Knowing how author’s are nowadays this review will most likely be deleted, but if anyone see’s this if you like someone Incredibly open about their life, and a boring overall story then you should read this. (This was written on my phone)
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He is god amongs ants. What does he has to fear? You read too many fanfic with all secret hush-hush, calm Mcs. Pointless hiding of abilities just to make it harder for Mc, to make drama, and help authors with no imagination to make plot. So tired of it. Especialy when pleople talk how smart it is. Smart is not alweys the best. Because to enjoy life you have to take risks. Dont be cowards guys, dont be smart, be yourselfs.
how? he can't even copy the powers of the phoenix force (atleast up to where I read to) without dying, how is he almighty? he is nothing in the grand scheme of things, someone like the beyonder, molecule man, one above all, and a lot of other characters would destroy him instantly
marcelll3214:He is god amongs ants. What does he has to fear? You read too many fanfic with all secret hush-hush, calm Mcs. Pointless hiding of abilities just to make it harder for Mc, to make drama, and help authors with no imagination to make plot. So tired of it. Especialy when pleople talk how smart it is. Smart is not alweys the best. Because to enjoy life you have to take risks. Dont be cowards guys, dont be smart, be yourselfs.image
Well is beyonder on a planet? or one above all? He is not interacting with them, but with ants. What is the point of hiding your power in front of beyonder if he can still destroy you with a flick of a finger? Also doomsday powers... Are you constantly trying to hide from meteor in space? Life full of fear is just stu***
ArtoriaPendragon_:how? he can't even copy the powers of the phoenix force (atleast up to where I read to) without dying, how is he almighty? he is nothing in the grand scheme of things, someone like the beyonder, molecule man, one above all, and a lot of other characters would destroy him instantly
Beyonder and One above all don’t wven need to be near him to kill him, One above all is omnipotent And can kill him in an instant, and Beyonder can kill him faster than he can react, plus doomsday powers should give him adaption, which makes him adapt to certain things, the mc is like i said before, weak and boring.
marcelll3214:Well is beyonder on a planet? or one above all? He is not interacting with them, but with ants. What is the point of hiding your power in front of beyonder if he can still destroy you with a flick of a finger? Also doomsday powers... Are you constantly trying to hide from meteor in space? Life full of fear is just stu***
Nah u too edgy. There's a limit to how "Cool" an MC can be and how it crossing the line of becoming stupid or annoying Imo
marcelll3214:He is god amongs ants. What does he has to fear? You read too many fanfic with all secret hush-hush, calm Mcs. Pointless hiding of abilities just to make it harder for Mc, to make drama, and help authors with no imagination to make plot. So tired of it. Especialy when pleople talk how smart it is. Smart is not alweys the best. Because to enjoy life you have to take risks. Dont be cowards guys, dont be smart, be yourselfs.image
Agreed
Spading:Nah u too edgy. There's a limit to how "Cool" an MC can be and how it crossing the line of becoming stupid or annoying Imo
marcelll3214:He is god amongs ants. What does he has to fear? You read too many fanfic with all secret hush-hush, calm Mcs. Pointless hiding of abilities just to make it harder for Mc, to make drama, and help authors with no imagination to make plot. So tired of it. Especialy when pleople talk how smart it is. Smart is not alweys the best. Because to enjoy life you have to take risks. Dont be cowards guys, dont be smart, be yourselfs.image
