The "Immortal" Suki Kang
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Just cause there are a lot of 5-Stars in your FanFic doesn't mean it's good. Your grammar in certain sentences are wrong. For example "Ah his back..." -From the MC himself. There are a couple more examples but since you don't like to listen then sure You are Perfect I guess🙃🙃
Stop adding '...' when you enter the 3rd POV. It is somewhat irritating
This reincarnated MC is trying hard to be like the OG Nurahinyon Lmao let him fulfill his fantasy
Good Good no Humanity MC bullcr@p. "I want to be Human..." Tch Tired of these kinds of FanFics. Good Job Author-san
Hallelujah no more Weak @ss Human MC in a Cultivation Novel where Non-Humans have stronger Potential overall
Author-san May I ask if he looks like Goxinia but has a name of Yuo Chen...
Then stop lecturing me about some White $hit I'm not interested in Smh