Hyuga mc with great potential to be more than his predecessors. He has a good relationship with tsunade what can we want more[img=recommend]

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I whole heartedly believe that this is one of the best Naruto fanfictions and if you disagree you're standards are way to high and I will warn you of the cruel world known as fanfiction.

Its a really good read but the story doesn't make any sense after a while... The situations that protagonist is going through feels forced and the natural flow things isn't there at all. Sometimes it feels as if things were done for only plot purposes but I am not the one to talk about that. Also, the amount of research this dude just put into the series is mind blowing. It is really amazing but it's more trouble than it's worth. Why? Because the researching is one of the best but writing quality is somehow not able to match that. Do not misunderstand when I say this. The writing quality is amazing, but the lack of effort in writing and so much effort in researching is painfully obvious that it feels a badly written novel when it isn't. It's DJ khaled: Suffering from Success at this point. I suppose it is a real good first attempt though. I suggest to stick to something natural a bit more and cut down on pouring in too much emotions in a scene and shrugging them off in next scene. protagonist is seriously suffering from a lot and seems a bit too un-chad for my taste I guess? (He gets one of the most violent women and gets a punch every now and then; I ain't spoiling it for you.) 7.6~8/10 would recommend.

Pretty ridiculous how Mito is some omnipotent god in this fanfic because she knows literally everything that will happen in the plot....she even finds out that there is something wrong with the MC's soul (since he was reincarnated). The romance on the other side is kinda weird because Tsunade is a lot older than the MC yet she fairly quickly gets used to the fact that her lover is much younger than her. It is also pretty corny since the MC just cuddles with Tsunade constantly at one point which is uhh questionable to say the least. The MC's abusive mother part feels really forced because she hates him so much and tortured him a lot which just doesn't make a lot of sense even in a world like Naruto. It's not like it's bad, but there are definitely parts that need to be improved on.

well sadly after the Uzio fall come and the fall of this FF !! forced plot and the way the author trying to not destroy the main timeline is just sad!! it start very good but sadly now is just plain bad!

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The story is good but the beginning has imo a lot of info dumps

I realy like it, while i was thinking the auther was realy makeing mc exploit it all like a video game i remember the start of his new life came with a screen saying “game start”…. and it all made sense