Pretty ridiculous how Mito is some omnipotent god in this fanfic because she knows literally everything that will happen in the plot....she even finds out that there is something wrong with the MC's soul (since he was reincarnated). The romance on the other side is kinda weird because Tsunade is a lot older than the MC yet she fairly quickly gets used to the fact that her lover is much younger than her. It is also pretty corny since the MC just cuddles with Tsunade constantly at one point which is uhh questionable to say the least. The MC's abusive mother part feels really forced because she hates him so much and tortured him a lot which just doesn't make a lot of sense even in a world like Naruto. It's not like it's bad, but there are definitely parts that need to be improved on.
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