So, this review is after I've written 90 chapters of the story. First of all, I'd like to say that this is a story through which I'm improving my writing. And as you might have noticed, it's currently improved enough to have quite high rankings if I update it regularly. It starts off cliche, since I didn't have anything planned at that time, but as the story progressed I had quite a few strokes of geniuses and was able to put some very unique and interesting factors to the story. Now, the character, the story, and the world has me so engrossed that I can't quit writing this story halfway, neither can I just rush it. Though I'm pretty sure I wouldn't be allowed to do that even if I wanted to, since many readers are even more immersed in it that I am. So, whoever actually read this whole rant, I'd give you some useful info. as well: ->Pacing: Slow-medium ->Lenght of chapters, from chapter 90 onwards, it's 2000-3000. since there are pátreon suppoters now. ->Pairing: Undecided. There's romance, but not yet committed relationship. There will be sweetness and quarreling. But there will be no drama like ntr.
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Is this harem?
well seeing as he basilcy sees himself as Nymphadoras future wife and is now flirting with fleur its most likely to be a harem of 2 maybe 3 girls but so far theres no romance outside of a few kisses
Daoist423242:Is this harem?
About harem or no harem, that's not main focus of the story. And neither have I decided what to do. But whatever I do, it'll be realistic. The female characters have a character of their own, so you can't expect him to have a girlfriend, much less a harem at eleven y/o while they're older. The romance would take time, and whatever happens, would be natural.
No offense, but honestly how the story is going I don't see another way except harem (not the biggest fan, but also nothing against it) so I hope u do it cause to me if u suddenly stopped the MC from 'teasing/flirting' it would be really bad, still make Dora the 1st As long as the MC doesn't go after girls like Pokémon and each girl can have their own 'screen time' it's all good Keep up the good work I'm liking the novel overall (u may not see me commenting for a while cause I prefer reading several chapters in a row and I just caught up xD)
Snollygoster:About harem or no harem, that's not main focus of the story. And neither have I decided what to do. But whatever I do, it'll be realistic. The female characters have a character of their own, so you can't expect him to have a girlfriend, much less a harem at eleven y/o while they're older. The romance would take time, and whatever happens, would be natural.
Make it harem, Come on tonks and fleur would be a great threesome you know. Your story made me like Tonks and Fleur so please go with a Harem but not So much like maybe 2-3?
Snollygoster:About harem or no harem, that's not main focus of the story. And neither have I decided what to do. But whatever I do, it'll be realistic. The female characters have a character of their own, so you can't expect him to have a girlfriend, much less a harem at eleven y/o while they're older. The romance would take time, and whatever happens, would be natural.
I wanted to read your story to tell you the truth, but since I don't know if it's going to be harem or just a love interest, I can't read it. because i don't want to waste time reading a future harem, i hate harem so i'll wait and maybe i'll come back in the future to see what your choice was, but i hope it's just 1 waifu.
Snollygoster:About harem or no harem, that's not main focus of the story. And neither have I decided what to do. But whatever I do, it'll be realistic. The female characters have a character of their own, so you can't expect him to have a girlfriend, much less a harem at eleven y/o while they're older. The romance would take time, and whatever happens, would be natural.
same hate harems it ruins it for me
No
Daoist423242:Is this harem?
Yes
Daoist423242:Is this harem?
unknown I not the author
Daoist423242:Is this harem?
Sorry got bored
Daoist423242:Is this harem?
bruh
Juto:Sorry got bored
i can feel like this can be a harem, he is a young master, and you describe/introduce females in a really good manner like they matter and not just a pokemon/follower of the mc that joins mc harem then author just makes them appear in few sentences and they are forgotten till the author remembers them
For me harem means that Mc is just too likable #harem
Snollygoster:About harem or no harem, that's not main focus of the story. And neither have I decided what to do. But whatever I do, it'll be realistic. The female characters have a character of their own, so you can't expect him to have a girlfriend, much less a harem at eleven y/o while they're older. The romance would take time, and whatever happens, would be natural.
so is it a harem now or not? Please give a clear yes or no answer, yes 2 women counts as a harem so dont play with the technicalities
Snollygoster:About harem or no harem, that's not main focus of the story. And neither have I decided what to do. But whatever I do, it'll be realistic. The female characters have a character of their own, so you can't expect him to have a girlfriend, much less a harem at eleven y/o while they're older. The romance would take time, and whatever happens, would be natural.
Magic isn't realistic either? The wizardry world isn't even modern..
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I mean yes but no It's difficult, but not Impossible there are working relationships with multiple partners. Bro I'm literally here because my great Grandpa had 3 women and they were ok with it. By the way, They were Catholic. So yes they are realistic they used to exist and some still do today. Also having multiple wives would fit in the Harry Potter world.
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plz pair him with tonks [img=update][img=update][img=recommend][img=recommend]
Snollygoster:About harem or no harem, that's not main focus of the story. And neither have I decided what to do. But whatever I do, it'll be realistic. The female characters have a character of their own, so you can't expect him to have a girlfriend, much less a harem at eleven y/o while they're older. The romance would take time, and whatever happens, would be natural.
Is this a multiverse story?
Snollygoster:About harem or no harem, that's not main focus of the story. And neither have I decided what to do. But whatever I do, it'll be realistic. The female characters have a character of their own, so you can't expect him to have a girlfriend, much less a harem at eleven y/o while they're older. The romance would take time, and whatever happens, would be natural.
"realistic" yeah cuz having a harem is "realistic" talk about ruining your book
Snollygoster:About harem or no harem, that's not main focus of the story. And neither have I decided what to do. But whatever I do, it'll be realistic. The female characters have a character of their own, so you can't expect him to have a girlfriend, much less a harem at eleven y/o while they're older. The romance would take time, and whatever happens, would be natural.
