An absolute diamond amongst coal. 1. The story is incredibly well-written. The flow is like a river that keeps getting stronger, and stronger until the climax or the waterfall. The author is incredible at doing this. 2. The plot has potential and is interesting. The MC would do anything for his sister and goes to extreme lengths to care for her. 2a. His personality is very human, in that he is selfish, yet apologetic about it. He is a regular man who can’t resist the allure of beauty. It’s a balance that I’ve never seen before. The author actually managed to capture what a real human would react like when seeing a beautiful woman: they stare and stare, but he isn’t a pervert who thinks about screwing her the moment they meet. Now, there are some spelling mistakes, but they are ALL easily forgivable. This is actually great. If I could, it would be a solid 10/5. But I have to settle for 5/5 sadly.

A really interesting premise and execution that has plenty of potential. I've only read 4 chapters so far, however from what I've read it's been very enjoyable. I especially like the world building in use as well as the sense of mystery portrayed that provokes the reader to really think on matters such as the true purpose for why the organisation is making them participate in the events. As well as the limitations of the world they are in. A minor qualm and improvement that I'm sure that could be easily fixed, is the sudden appearance of something for the sake of the plot. I feel that at times the reason why something happens can be quite unnatural but I'm sure it can get better with practice. Overall, I would definitely reccomend you to pick this up as it's an excellent read.

One "unicycle-sized" review for you: ;) Author-san, your work is a breath of fresh air on the platform, with the degree of passion and energy your writing exudes. The condept on its own is intriguing, but the solid execution is what sells it: Your descriptions, whether it be of the minute actionsnof a goblin or town setting, are phenomenally vivid and creative: choices of wording such as describing the town as "mischief" or its atmosphere being an "ocean," or the "iron ichor" and effects of a potion really stood out to me. Keep it up!

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I've read the first chapters so I will be updating this review soon 😁 The writing flow is truly to be admired of and what I appreciate most is how the action scenes are written. You can practically imagine it happening in your mind! The character is also someone that you can imagine and respect since his development shows you what kind of person he is. Love the description of the surrounding world! For anyone that wants to get immersed in a fantasy world with vivid imaginery that you can imagine coming to life? This should be your book of choice!

Wow, just by reading the synopsis i felt so intrigued. I can bet the story is going to be a blast. In each and every sense. I hope, net won't be all alone. And he will find a partner soon

Everyone wants a good mobile or computer game, and everyone loves a good novel. You combine them both and you get to have such a rare reader's experience. This is what the book provided for me, and I recommend for other people to try it out too. dwarves, goblins, demons, and werewolves as game-novel enemies can make the world-building truly massive by a novel's standards! It is a feat that was easily done by the author!

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