Very captivating as usual. Unique dystopian setting and but it’s easy to follow with smooth planning of when to disclose more world building information. The writing is also very good at letting readers visualise what’s happening, for better and for worse. (Kinda turned into the horror genre at some parts. 😔) Keep writing and drawing! :D

This is one of few masterpieces ive read. the story gives a more in depth feel. it feels almost 3 dimensional compared to the black and white worlds of other webnovels. it has publishing potential. the only other book with this depth ive read is STORY OF EVIL. I highly recomend this webnovel

PLEASE READ THE REVIEW BEFORE CONTINUING. Hello, the author here explaining some things you should remember before reading the book. 1. Many things will not make any sense in the first few chapters, but instead of worrying too much about it, just enjoy the story. Everything will be revealed in due time. 2. Anastasia Valentina, the lead heroine of the novel, is quite a bad character at first. While she might be unbearable, she gets better soon so please bear through the introductory chapters. 3. The MC doesn't have a hero syndrome, but he always pays back his debts, even when his life is in danger. This changes with due time, but he will do some stupid things in the first few chapters to satisfy his own heart, so bear with that. 4. Some of you have asked why the MC goes through the things he does in the first chapters, like the monitoring and the surgery... which will be explained in the later chapters so please don't ask me why he does so right now! 5. While the MC is overpowered, he isn't without his losses. His powers come at a price, so don't expect him to be the strongest of all. In the first place, he can't even join the arena battles right now, which is the main concept of the story. 6. This is not a harem, but it does have a love triangle. 7. No NTR. 8. the chapters of the first volume are long, around 1.7K words each, some going over 2K. This might change around the future, but for now, you'll get almost 400 pages (100K words) for free, so please read up to chapter 58 before dropping it. (If the chapters aren't locked yet, they soon will be so better read em fast!) 9. I know some of you might read it on pirated sites and all that... even if you do, please use your power stones and positive reviews on this book so that I can gain some more readers. It's free to do so. Though I would rather appreciate it if you bought it from here, it doesn't cost that much. 10. Just enjoy the book!

this is really terrible, like who makes all the chapters that is pointless and make them free, while the chapters with the actual main story is stupid

Awesome worldbuilding and very little grammar mistakes are things I love, however, mind numingly dumb story development, is something I don't like. I read upto the point where Arnold, Grey and the unknown Elliot encountered and defeated the s class phantom, but couldn't continue. Why, just why, does Arnold want to save the Elliot so bad, there is just no logical reason. The Elliot had only been cruel and ruthless, not making a good enough impact to make Arnold attached, but he still desperately wanted to save her, risking his life in the process. It just makes no sense. I'm going to give story about 4 stars only because of the awesome world building.

This is a quality story unlike anything else I have read on webnovel. The story idea is completely original and has the reader hooked right from the start. I love the way the protagonist is set up, having dealt with such tragedy at a young age and losing his grandma. The story moves at a great pace and the writing is crisp and clear, making this a rollercoaster of a read. The writing quality is very good, providing just enough info for the reader to be guided by and fill in the blanks with their imagination. Really engrossing opening. I see a bright future for this one.

I like how you narrate things and it's world I once have that writing style but I think it's already the uniqueness of the story keep writing!

In all honesty, I'm not a huge fan of mecha stories, but this novel is truly a gem. The writing quality is good, the plot development is intriguing, the characters are unique, and the world background is well set-up. The author portrays the emotions the characters are feeling very descriptively, allowing us, the readers, to connect with them. The only flaw I really see is that sometimes, I find that the flow in the early chapters gets disrupted by the computer's 'voice'. Whether that was intentional or not, I don't know. Still, this is a really good novel that you should definitely try.

I don't usually read such genre but this one is an exception. To be honest, I like the writing style and the storyline is something captivating. Waiting for more chapters tho. Job well done and good luck!