Item: Isekai : Cheat Internet connection
Rating: 2

kingdomkingsLv153yr

2021-06-19 22:03

you have a good idea and a great background but you need more writing experience you are all over the place with your writing and I get lost sometimes reading

Isekai : Cheat Internet connection

Si_Koplak

3.3

272 Chs

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Si_Koplak作者

thank you very much for the suggestions and input ... sorry if there are many shortcomings in writing, this is the first work in English and also the first time writing in English so it's still shortcomings ... in the future we will make improvements in terms of writing, again sorry

3yr

Dr_IntrovertLv2

Your English will improve as long as you continue writing. If you can't afford an editor or proofreader the try to learn English from scratch I am doing the same. there are many videos on YouTube you can take a look. The overall story idea is good 👍 keep up the good up and improve yourself constantly.

Si_Koplak:thank you very much for the suggestions and input ... sorry if there are many shortcomings in writing, this is the first work in English and also the first time writing in English so it's still shortcomings ... in the future we will make improvements in terms of writing, again sorry

2yr

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Si_Koplak作者

Thank you for reading this novel, there are still many shortcomings in terms of writing, especially in English. Sorry, in the future I will correct any mistakes in writing. 🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏

3yr

WanderingImmortal_Lv14

I'm sorry, i tried. i really tried. but i can't anymore, it was so confusing for me. if ever try using your language then find someone who can translate this to english or just let someone proofread your english. this may help you a lot from publishing better chapters and also learning english a bit more.

3yr

Gojusensi_441Lv4

U have to write more clearly cause I can focus sometimes but overall it's plot is good but just improve your writing capabilities I know it's hard but try using grameely u can avoid gramer mistakes

3yr

Bilal_KaplanLv1

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PhantomMedjayLv11

Dont know what is happening with the broken grammar. Sorry but till you edit your work, I cannot continue reading. Great idea with the story, just needs a better quality finish of your work.

3yr

LuciferBloodfallenLv2

this book i great I would have given more rating but the sentences are a bit.... However don't be disappointed correct your writing a bit more and the story will shine. I liked the story overall just make sure u write more clearly maybe get a editor who is good in English

3yr

Little_FoxxyLv13

Don't stop writing, you can do it. Don't stop expressing, or you'll dull the skill. Don't stop improving, writer fever makes us ill. Don't stop having fun, story must be told and seen.

3yr

ReaderLoveLv14

This novel has more flaws than that one fantic novel with 1000 chapter and I thought that was bad but this is just worse. The whole structure of the writing need to be fixed before people can enjoy the plot of the novel.

2yr

Fenrirzero9999Lv13

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dopplegangerLv5

Sorry author. I have to stop reading this novel. I can't understand it at all even it's written in English. Try to find someone else to proofread your work.

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