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This is a story brimming with potential! It offers a unique premise based on a futuristic society obsessed with enhancements and a protagonist transported from our modern world. There's a great blend of humor and intriguing world-building, making it a fun read. A few key areas could use some polish, but overall its good read. Writing Quality: Your writing is clear and easy to follow especially for lemon scenes. Stability of updates: Low, Only 3 to 4 chapters per week. Author please increase update speed. Story Development: The pacing is a bit slow, focusing mainly on two characters until recently. More characters are being introduced in latest chapters. Character Design: The main character, Nox, could use more depth. His internal monologues are hilarious, but his personality needs further development. Supporting characters like Lyra, Thea are well-defined and engaging. World building: It's okay for now Final note: This story is suitable for anyone looking for well-written steamy scenes and humorous moments – Nox's internal struggles are a highlight. With greater attention to world-building, faster updates, and further development of Nox's character, this novel could become a real gem.
4k words .... I have published those many words it's still not vetted... It must be because it's weekend. Anyway thanks for the confirmation 👍
Yes, I wanted to check if book has vetted or not so I used repeat chp
No, I stopped writing for some reason but now I have resumed you can search books name and read chapters
Nah I had some college stuff going on thus I put an hold on the writing but now I have started to write again.
No I have started updating
Welcome, Can you help me check if my book is supporting power stone? Because it's not accepting from my side
I will be updating this one.. But my main focus would be that book
There is? Could You tell me the name?