Binge_review Writing Quality: 4/5. Biased cuz I am not a big fan of 1st person pov. Imo, 3rp person pov gives more space for us to write and makes the story more engaging, however, every author has his own style. Not complaining. Stability Of Updates: 5/5. Regular updates is what everyone wants. Story Development: 4.5/5. The story pacing is alright. We are only at chapter 18, so not much can be said, but yeah, I have high hopes from this fanfic. Character Design: 4/5. This is the only thing that I think needs improvement. I know you want a cold OP Mc, but I would recommend using more vocabulary(?) and go with 'show, not tell' approach (cutting the guards in two halves is not enough.) World Background: 5/5. There's no point in giving lower rating in this part. Marvel is like the ocean and this fanfic is a cruise. It's up to you, as the author, to sail through this, and it's up to us to enjoy our time. final thoughts: I read that you are going to make changes in the timeline. I only hope that things don't get entangled. Playing with timeline in fanfics is risky because the chances of plot holes is very high. Overall: 4.6/5 Thank you for this fanfic. You are doing a great job.

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This work is complete sh1t!!! It is not logical and not real at all. You'd better to drop it. Sorry for being rude...............................,.............................

My poor poor braincells 😭 !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

love the fanfic. don't know why there is one hater who doesn't explain what's wrong with it but oh well. love everything about it so far keep up the good work.

It's only 3 chapter's in but in those 3 chapter's i see good potential in this fan fic I hope you don't mess this shit up man with a edgy **** mc I want a mature mc who is mentally strong but a bit depressed but is not some dark edgy bitch that feels like the world owns him something,he got a second chance with superpowers so he should be a little grateful

The Spelling is pretty bad and the overall organization of the story is bad, mostly because their are like three chapters wher they should be deleted or be in the Auxillary chapters. The plot is interesting but I feel like I barely know the MC, before and after his transmigration. Overall this story is good and unpredictable with all the different plot lines mixed in.

you should get the venom of the goliath bord eating spider because there hairs actually cause irritation and itching so just enhance that and make it off and on

this is some advanced confusion crap geammar mumbo jumbo with selective reading where you just ignore and move past the $%\^| .

This story is very good so far and I'm looking forward for more chapters and how the story will go on, so please keep up the good work that is this story.