This work is complete sh1t!!! It is not logical and not real at all. You'd better to drop it. Sorry for being rude...............................,.............................
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LIKEIn the beginning, it was still possible to read. I mean, I tried to do it. But what the **** is with the SHIELD. The description of the characters is terrible. And many more shoals.
Why would I drop it because it’s not to your liking vs the other people who like it.
i haven’t read yet but i respect this
Kyosuke_Uchiha:Why would I drop it because it’s not to your liking vs the other people who like it.
just a tip to not waste your time. you'd better start over. you can't get very far
can you tell me what he did wrong i dont care about spoilers
DaoistuPWnIK:just a tip to not waste your time. you'd better start over. you can't get very far
dude many people enjoy it its is pretty much only you that dislikes it.
Not real? This is a FANFIC, of course its not real.
Se vc acha ruim faz melhor que ele em vez de fica enchendo o saco
yeah lol, not many people get that.
3RR0R_404:Not real? This is a FANFIC, of course its not real.
This is a fanfic in the first place, you idiot and you're seriously saying it's not logical, it's in a fictional world with fictional characters who can survive being a popsicle for 70 years and a fricking god, you dimwit.
This is gold compared to some novels that goes like God:you ded Mc:ok God:I give u 3 wishes Mc: unlimited power, invincible plot armor, and system God:ok
just don't read it. just 'coz you don't like it, doesn't mean the same for others.
DaoistuPWnIK:In the beginning, it was still possible to read. I mean, I tried to do it. But what the **** is with the SHIELD. The description of the characters is terrible. And many more shoals.
I dislike it
Wraith_Widow:dude many people enjoy it its is pretty much only you that dislikes it.
Hi :) What is the name of your waifu?
Endless_Suffering:I dislike it
fair enough
Endless_Suffering:I dislike it
preach man preach
kiefg:Se vc acha ruim faz melhor que ele em vez de fica enchendo o saco
If you don’t like the story then just leave, don’t tell the author to drop their story just cause it doesn’t live up to your standards. If you so mad on how the author writes their story then why don’t you go and write your own instead of complaining. some of us can’t even write a five paragraph essay and here are authors who are using their own time to write full on stories for our entertainment even though the story might be bad and im not saying this story is bad, this is one of my favorite fanfiction as of now. Sometimes I just get so mad how people complain about these stories, but don’t realize how authors do this out of their own free will and are not forced into this, if you don’t like how a story is written then stop reading it, there’s no need to criticize the authors.
