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2021-03-18 00:57

F.a.s.c.i.n.a.t.i.n.g and very well written book. Beautifully written story and characters. Dazzling five stars for author's style of writing as I like it a lot. Author is great with her choice of words and her style in structuring sentence. Her writing is cool and she is very great in writing the dialogue. You could feel the characters through their interaction which is written in fresh and unique style. I find the writing here is up to professional standard as throughout the story you will find little to no mistake in grammar. This book is extremely comfortable to read, way above most of webnovels. Writing wise, story wise, characters wise, female lead wise, humour wise. All rightly deserve perfect five stars. The way author introduced and explained things is good. Story development has been good so far, the anticipation and guessing keeps me at the edge every time. The story is filled with emotions and feelings that are portrayed well. I've read a lot of webnovels and this book is among top list that I could find myself so immerse with the story. Believe me this author is really talented and creative writer. Please if you could keep your regular updates I could see there will be a time for this book to get well recognised. Very promising book. I'm not trying to be cheesy here but it's my honest review of this book as I genuinely like this book. My appreciation for good quality book. The bad: It's hard to find flaw in this book really, as this book is almost flawless. From writing, story, characters and everything is good. So I could only pointed out it personal. Personally, so far I find it hard to like Jordan, I don't know why but don't get me wrong his character is interesting, again it's my personal opinion. Cover is not good enough for a story as good as this. And the last, it's shame to say but the level of writing in this book (for me personally as a writer) is discouraging. I mean, writing wise, this book is great to the point I ask myself, why do I write. I wish I could write like this someday, well don't mind me. Again, the writing is what I like most in this book. However, I got bad omen regarding the direction of the story is heading, knowing the future in the first chapter and from the title. I mean look at the title: Love FOUND and LOST. not LOST AND FOUND. it could be just my feeling, I hope the story ends on happy note, for Rosemary and Mr Parker. It's truly great reading experience! Best luck for you!

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Oh, my God. You are so precious! Thank you so much for this honest review! I am elated after reading this🥺🥺♥️ I honestly appreciate your words and praise! You have made my day, my week, my month! I will try my best to keep the updates regular and as far as Jordan is concerned, he is bit of a grey character and I will soon be dropping his POV as well! There will be little back and forth from the present to the past. As for the ending of this book, it is decided already but I cannot comment on it🤭 but I'm thinking around 50 chapters for this one. Could be more or less! I like to go with flow :)

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