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I love it bro i love this masterpiece but can i give you my opinion on stuff. First- i love the way the characters react mostky the girls and the mc, i dont care abt naruto that much tbh. Second- can he be more like an Itachi type of mc yunno and not an emo cuz if he’s an emo he’ll just be like sasgay, but i do see how your making him be conflicted just like itachi was and i hope he is like itachi except of doing everything to protect the village he will do everything he can for his harem or loved ones even if it means fighting the village yunno? I just hope you read this and take this hnder consideration Keep up the great work bro there is a couple of grammar errors here and there but not that much or not enough to make me drop this story yunno and it can easily be fixed so i hope you dont drop this masterpiece bro. This has the potential in my opinion to be the best fanfic of naruto ever bro

Wanting More (Naruto Fanfic)

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Well the MC does have similar belief of protecting his love ones no matter what, even if he has to become a Villian. Also the reason he came to think of breaking his bonds with them is because he doesn't want his future actions danger to go to them. As for the error issue's well it's because I'm on my phone. I don't have a PC or laptop so only device I could write and read on.