Wanting More (Naruto Fanfic)

excellent novel 4.8 or 4.7, but. (the last 2 chapters will destroy everything). touches on the subject of rape (unnecessary, but ok (-, 05 stars)) Nerf, Nerf and more Nerf (5 years stop was the worst garbage I've ever read (-3 stars)) (seriously the author's trash made Mc stay 5 years without training 1 second and away from everyone, absolute trash) Mc is a badly made Sasuke, seriously, I never liked Sasuke, but I can't believe the author made me prefer the original Sasuke to this 2.0 copy (-1 star) 4,8-0,5-3-1 = 0,3 stars

Story goes bad really fast. The author is taking some inspiration, but unfortunately from the wrong places... -4 genins in team 7(or any other team) is one of the stupidest thing and least creative thing I've ever seen it would never happen. -If future shinobi would need 5 years of treatment from something that he knows is fake, then surely he needs to change current his aim and be a civilian, cuz obviously even a civilian would take less time, and rape on kunoichis isn't even a thing, nobody is stupid enough to do this(there could be a technique that prevents them and no one sane would even take a chance in the world of professional killers), rape wasn't mentioned once in naruto. -Harem doesn't fit this world at all, if u want to write fanfic with this type of theme chose world that features it like dxd, thing like CRA isn't even a canon, people think it is, but it isn't, it was created by fanfictions.

It should get a drama tag. This is one of those stories where they take the bad childhood shtick and try to one up it several times. Its well written tough and if Drama is your thing, you're at the right adress, that said. It has all the over the top clichés in a slightly more unique drama package that allows him to somehow be the cringy emo that women throw themselves onto. Its a fun enough read if drama is your thing. For me, it was just a bit too much and over the top as it made me dislike the main character with a vengeance.

well this is my honest opinion Your novel has a good concept, a good list of members of the harem, but you screwed up everything with the "new" personality of the MC (I think it's something of yours wanting to express it through your protagonists, since something like that is in your other work) the subject of the rape he saw in the Tsukuyomi is silly, but the fact that he cannot recover after seeing that and wanting to get away from the girls just to not harm them with the curse of hatred, makes your MC seem like an idiot , since neither Sasuke who happened something the same (he even saw his parents die directly) recovered and tried to give his all to overcome himself, being alone, and your MC who has Mikoto and Sayaka (fem sasuke) throws everything away ......

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Amazing work tragic backstory with the MC experience if trauma and touching on some very touchy subjects which quite a few authors are too scared to do so he has my respect

Kualitas menulis Stabilitas Pembaruan Pengembangan Cerita Desain karakter Latar Belakang Dunia Skor total 5.0 Terlalu malas untuk memberi komentar , yang penting Novel ini tidak hiatus

Everything is good like my type of mc and main thing it has harem with cold MC so this is my cup of tea .. ... ........ .. . .. ... .. ...... ..

I love it bro i love this masterpiece but can i give you my opinion on stuff. First- i love the way the characters react mostky the girls and the mc, i dont care abt naruto that much tbh. Second- can he be more like an Itachi type of mc yunno and not an emo cuz if he’s an emo he’ll just be like sasgay, but i do see how your making him be conflicted just like itachi was and i hope he is like itachi except of doing everything to protect the village he will do everything he can for his harem or loved ones even if it means fighting the village yunno? I just hope you read this and take this hnder consideration Keep up the great work bro there is a couple of grammar errors here and there but not that much or not enough to make me drop this story yunno and it can easily be fixed so i hope you dont drop this masterpiece bro. This has the potential in my opinion to be the best fanfic of naruto ever bro

Clan restoration act, a bunch of figure heads allowing Danzo who is usually acting in the shadows to publicly announce villagers to used as breeding machines for the sake of preserving bloodlines? Did you even read the manga, Danzo was the one who plotted the Uchiha Massacre to obtain the shisui's sharingan to control people, collect the many sharingans and even went as far as to plot the third hokage assassination with orochimaru, all because he disagreed with his 'soft' ways. He was responsible for Naruto's village hated childhood, fueling it from the back! The fact his Danzo's decision was only rebuked by the third shows this is a world i would gladly root for Madara to successfully reincarnate and win

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I liked the beginning, but when you started to change the gender of the characters, he started to dislike the novel. I can't imagine how someone writes, about romance with a female counterpart of a man.

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