The grammar is good..the MC's powers are Lit and his "I ain't taking no crap" personality is awesome....overall good job and keep it up.....
被117人贊過
贊he is in between good and bad... He isn't good because he kills but he isn't bad either cuz he only kills those who deserve it...if he sees a crime happening in front of him like for example a villain robbing someone or a hero doing something illegal and unhero-like, he won't hesitate to do what he thinks is right..but he is also cautious and is not overconfident in his abilities cuz he knows there are others stronger than him out there...if i were too compare him to an anime character, it would be lelouch...they both kill corrupt people regardless of their status and position while keeping their identity a secret all the while the public view him as a bad guy in the beginning but slowly look up to him because of his creed of only killing those who are worse than trash
Ballad:Is he a wannabe hero or is he just a free chaotic guy who does whatever he wants screw the laws?
so he is like the punisher but less angry?
Yanagi_sense1:he is in between good and bad... He isn't good because he kills but he isn't bad either cuz he only kills those who deserve it...if he sees a crime happening in front of him like for example a villain robbing someone or a hero doing something illegal and unhero-like, he won't hesitate to do what he thinks is right..but he is also cautious and is not overconfident in his abilities cuz he knows there are others stronger than him out there...if i were too compare him to an anime character, it would be lelouch...they both kill corrupt people regardless of their status and position while keeping their identity a secret all the while the public view him as a bad guy in the beginning but slowly look up to him because of his creed of only killing those who are worse than trash