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Yanagi_sense1
Yanagi_sense1Lv133yr
2021-01-19 00:58

The grammar is good..the MC's powers are Lit and his "I ain't taking no crap" personality is awesome....overall good job and keep it up.....

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Ballad
BalladLv5

Is he a wannabe hero or is he just a free chaotic guy who does whatever he wants screw the laws?

Yanagi_sense1
Yanagi_sense1Lv13

he is in between good and bad... He isn't good because he kills but he isn't bad either cuz he only kills those who deserve it...if he sees a crime happening in front of him like for example a villain robbing someone or a hero doing something illegal and unhero-like, he won't hesitate to do what he thinks is right..but he is also cautious and is not overconfident in his abilities cuz he knows there are others stronger than him out there...if i were too compare him to an anime character, it would be lelouch...they both kill corrupt people regardless of their status and position while keeping their identity a secret all the while the public view him as a bad guy in the beginning but slowly look up to him because of his creed of only killing those who are worse than trash

Ballad:Is he a wannabe hero or is he just a free chaotic guy who does whatever he wants screw the laws?
Iron_Angel_Mk_69
Iron_Angel_Mk_69Lv4

so he is like the punisher but less angry?

Yanagi_sense1:he is in between good and bad... He isn't good because he kills but he isn't bad either cuz he only kills those who deserve it...if he sees a crime happening in front of him like for example a villain robbing someone or a hero doing something illegal and unhero-like, he won't hesitate to do what he thinks is right..but he is also cautious and is not overconfident in his abilities cuz he knows there are others stronger than him out there...if i were too compare him to an anime character, it would be lelouch...they both kill corrupt people regardless of their status and position while keeping their identity a secret all the while the public view him as a bad guy in the beginning but slowly look up to him because of his creed of only killing those who are worse than trash
HikaYami
HikaYamiLv13

You could read the story only 13 chapters mate.

Iron_Angel_Mk_69:so he is like the punisher but less angry?
Assassin1St
Assassin1StLv14

I love you name and bio

SMOLLBUTTEREBOLL
SMOLLBUTTEREBOLLLv4

Ahmm sir the mc will stay single in the story?

Yanagi_sense1
Yanagi_sense1Lv13

uhm i don't think so...read the latest chapter and you'll know who he'll be paired with Hint: She has the same personality as him, is a big foodie and is super cute and also strong

SMOLLBUTTEREBOLL:Ahmm sir the mc will stay single in the story?
SMOLLBUTTEREBOLL
SMOLLBUTTEREBOLLLv4

Ahahha. .. Thanks😆

ThatsClassified
ThatsClassifiedLv11

when you got laws that permits you to arrest kids for using quirks in public and abandons people who dont have quirks, I dont think most would follow laws

Ballad:Is he a wannabe hero or is he just a free chaotic guy who does whatever he wants screw the laws?
SayNoToHarem
SayNoToHaremLv4

can i ask if the novel is drop or not

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