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Endless_SufferingLv24yr
2021-01-31 16:12

It's... bad, like bad, BAD. I don't even know how it got such a high review. 1.The author didn't respect the original work 2. It's too dark, I'm fine with dark society mha fanfics, but this one is a little bit over the top. 3. The author said the MC is a typical lazy fat otaku. But when he reincarnated he gained killing intent that is felt 2 blocks away, like how? how did he get killing intent? he literally did nothing to get that much killing intent. To summarize it, this an mha world that is adopted to be something like a xianxia/wuxia world

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Author_chan_Fox
Author_chan_FoxLv1

um.. about the dark thing... Its the story of the author (even if its in a world that the author does not own) Some people like that so...

Endless_Suffering
Endless_SufferingLv2

Yes, some people like it and some don't. Guess which applies to me?

Author_chan_Fox:um.. about the dark thing... Its the story of the author (even if its in a world that the author does not own) Some people like that so...
Yack6
Yack6Lv3

I swear I was reading the comments and saw this comment I do not know why they say this, look that I am a person of high standards very few fanfic I like and this is one of what I liked the most, so that a person likes comes, I always say that you will always see a person who says something negative because not everything is perfect . There he says where I get his murderous intention because well in the system there was something like that 1LV_Intencion killer Well, as we all know, then it goes up in level and there goes the logic I explain? And where he says he doesn't respect the story that he's going to respect if it's his fanfic his rules that he has to respect only one is based the title on the system because it has powers and appearance related to that novel.

Endless_Suffering
Endless_SufferingLv2

And? If you like it that's fine that's your preference/opinion, but I don't and I showed that by making this review based on MY opinion.

Yack6:I swear I was reading the comments and saw this comment I do not know why they say this, look that I am a person of high standards very few fanfic I like and this is one of what I liked the most, so that a person likes comes, I always say that you will always see a person who says something negative because not everything is perfect . There he says where I get his murderous intention because well in the system there was something like that 1LV_Intencion killer Well, as we all know, then it goes up in level and there goes the logic I explain? And where he says he doesn't respect the story that he's going to respect if it's his fanfic his rules that he has to respect only one is based the title on the system because it has powers and appearance related to that novel.
DURJOY_Barua
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