Review Detail of Xerstoren in My Netori System: The Graceful ones

Bad grammar, hard to read. MC is a psycho. Shotacon 🤮 The story flow is rushed and the system doesn't help either. That's the most important points I've seen so far. It's a pity though, the premise is interesting but those forementioned points killed my interest in the novel. Don't know if the author will edit the chaps so he can make it more bearable but for now it is what it is.