Dude....before starting I would like to say that I love harem!!!! But a harem without any proper story..........not. I think that you should try to write this novel on a proper foundation i.e., Slice of life of Mc. Do you know that readers come to like an MC by seeing his daily life? They like the MC when they can understand him/her. I also want to say that I also don't like MC catching women like pokemons.

The author I will support you! The main thing is not to leave the story please !!! ____________________________________________________________________________

Typical reincarnation to harem story. MC seems to plan around everything just to get a harem. At this point it just hinders the story, which is already kinda moot.

First of all I like how the story is progressing so far and I hope you don't drop it. now the next thing is about the harem I honestly love harem and romance novels so I don't mind if you made a harem but you have to keep in mind that if you make a huge harem then the story would not go that well so keep it small or medium depends on you actually , next try to create a health relationship with the girls and not just them being dolls for sexual purpose (this would be hard but don't stress about it) , we don't mind if you did a few chapter on them also. Next superman has a lot of weakness like kryptonite ,magic, red sun etc you get it right, so try to have him build resistance against it if possible thank you [img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=recommend][img=exp][img=fp][img=fp]

just a basic harem that you can find everywhere like legit catch em all f U C K harem

the MC is a perverted ***ist pedo. he's planning a harem as a bady and he's already grooming Lana Lang to be in it. that's just sick. he uses his x-ray eyes to perv on pretty much every female he see's. the author is too much of a DC fanboy to make any changes to the story no matter how much sense they'd make in the story. this story is just a big example of what not to do with your SI. power hungry, ***ist, pervert.

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Decent, fan fiction. with a lot of haters who still keep reading for whatever reason. they have to be enjoying it if they staid this long. think my only pet peeve is not really knowing what the main character is aiming for plot wise.

Awesome fanfic... requesting author to never stop writing .. should add more emotions superb story should add many chapters .. your everlasting fan...