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Just_ForFun
Just_ForFunLv54yr
2020-09-11 02:14

First of all I like how the story is progressing so far and I hope you don't drop it. now the next thing is about the harem I honestly love harem and romance novels so I don't mind if you made a harem but you have to keep in mind that if you make a huge harem then the story would not go that well so keep it small or medium depends on you actually , next try to create a health relationship with the girls and not just them being dolls for sexual purpose (this would be hard but don't stress about it) , we don't mind if you did a few chapter on them also. Next superman has a lot of weakness like kryptonite ,magic, red sun etc you get it right, so try to have him build resistance against it if possible thank you [img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=recommend][img=exp][img=fp][img=fp]

Reincarnated as Superman

Avi2112
4.5
80 Chs

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Avi2112
Avi2112Author

Thank you!!

4yr
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Hammer_Black
Hammer_BlackLv4

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Avi2112
Avi2112Author

ask away .... you can join discord too if you want 😅

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Avi2112
Avi2112Author

It's not every pretty girl type of thing ... it may seem that way now but there will be some who are just friends or just friends with benefits.

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Avi2112
Avi2112Author

No he does have a soft soft for women unless they are like really evil .

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Avi2112
Avi2112Author

Depends on who she is ... as there are other ways then just basic killing

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Avi2112
Avi2112Author

as I said he has a soft spot for women, especially good looking ones.

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Dowens
DowensLv4

To much harem

4yr
MaxAkki
MaxAkkiLv5

Have You dropped this book ? I really liked it and really hope it's not dropped

4yr
spiderman3_4
spiderman3_4Lv13

Hope you are ok and fine , alot are waiting for new chapters, again hope you are ok and see you soon

Avi2112:Thank you!!
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LackOfLovelife
LackOfLovelifeLv5

r usome **** sick who lobe harem? lord have mercy with your lonely horny self.

3yr
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Just_ForFun
Just_ForFunLv5

umm... i dont know why you feel offended that I like harem you could have just minded your own business but noo you had to come and stick your bloody f****** ass , for all of us to see I mean its just a FanFiction man why do you have to come and bother me ,so what if I like harem i enjoy all types of gener shut the **** up and mind your own bussiness .

LackOfLovelife:r usome **** sick who lobe harem? lord have mercy with your lonely horny self.
3yr
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Just_ForFun
Just_ForFunLv5

you are a deprressed self centred ass hole who are you to judge what i like or do with my life and i enjoy what i do in my free time so go **** your self

LackOfLovelife:r usome **** sick who lobe harem? lord have mercy with your lonely horny self.
3yr
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SabertoothX15
SabertoothX15Lv13

Dude....before starting I would like to say that I love harem!!!! But a harem without any proper story..........not. I think that you should try to write this novel on a proper foundation i.e., Slice of life of Mc. Do you know that readers come to like an MC by seeing his daily life? They like the MC when they can understand him/her. I also want to say that I also don't like MC catching women like pokemons.

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Barth0ld
Barth0ldLv2

The author I will support you! The main thing is not to leave the story please !!! ____________________________________________________________________________

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Maurz
MaurzLv4

Typical reincarnation to harem story. MC seems to plan around everything just to get a harem. At this point it just hinders the story, which is already kinda moot.

4yr
Mud_Man
Mud_ManLv4

just a basic harem that you can find everywhere like legit catch em all f U C K harem

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Seraphy64
Seraphy64Lv10

the MC is a perverted ***ist pedo. he's planning a harem as a bady and he's already grooming Lana Lang to be in it. that's just sick. he uses his x-ray eyes to perv on pretty much every female he see's. the author is too much of a DC fanboy to make any changes to the story no matter how much sense they'd make in the story. this story is just a big example of what not to do with your SI. power hungry, ***ist, pervert.

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Zerr
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NevoNeko
NevoNekoLv14

Decent, fan fiction. with a lot of haters who still keep reading for whatever reason. they have to be enjoying it if they staid this long. think my only pet peeve is not really knowing what the main character is aiming for plot wise.

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IceEmperor
IceEmperorLv5

Awesome fanfic... requesting author to never stop writing .. should add more emotions superb story should add many chapters .. your everlasting fan...

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