Dude....before starting I would like to say that I love harem!!!! But a harem without any proper story..........not. I think that you should try to write this novel on a proper foundation i.e., Slice of life of Mc. Do you know that readers come to like an MC by seeing his daily life? They like the MC when they can understand him/her. I also want to say that I also don't like MC catching women like pokemons.
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贊Don't stress...this is your story....you can do anything.....I hope you can make this novel a slow-paced one when he grows up because I like a relaxing story with some action, romance, drama, comedy and lastly HAREM!!! And also, I like this novel (Also added to the library).
Avi2112:Thank you for your review!!image
SabertoothX15:Don't stress...this is your story....you can do anything.....I hope you can make this novel a slow-paced one when he grows up because I like a relaxing story with some action, romance, drama, comedy and lastly HAREM!!! And also, I like this novel (Also added to the library).image
will you continue your story????
SabertoothX15:Don't stress...this is your story....you can do anything.....I hope you can make this novel a slow-paced one when he grows up because I like a relaxing story with some action, romance, drama, comedy and lastly HAREM!!! And also, I like this novel (Also added to the library).image