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2021-01-22 04:59

One thing- If I could reach this level of writing skills😐 I would've trespassed JKS with my plots😆 But, You indeed gave me an extra reason to read your story- I got many unique vibes from your Novel. I feel, it wouldn't be a surprise if you one day get yourself into the Top50 WN writers😊 Looking forward for the day when it comes.😇

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Thank you so much, hope I will reach there!!💓

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Writing Quality: When I read it, in my mind I went 'Wow"! This is almost professional. The writing is top-notch, very well and immaculately descriptive. The scenes are easy to visualise and digest, although I personally would prefer some longer paragraphs to be broken down. There are a few minor spelling mistakes, but it doesn't shake my verdict of giving it 5 stars. Stability of Updates: It was a little inconsistent at the start, it stabilised recently. Story Development: The introduction of the story lands us, the readers straight into suspense drawing the readers deeper into the story which was then luring us further into more suspense and conflict. It's an neverending abyss, once in nowhere out. The story just keeps growing with the different realms, the lore of the realms, bloodline, honour, war and conflict. Character Design: I like how the characters interact with each other, their conversations have weight behind their history, burdens and culture. The large amount of characters can be quite chaotic and difficult to control but the author made them relevant and interesting. Excellent! The characters somewhat reminded me of some WarCraft. World Background: Similar to what I've commented on the character design. The world background is heavily saturated with so much potential on their lores. The different kingdoms with their different culture. Politics with alliances and honour. The realms the characters venture around; the modern society we know of and a magical fantasy one gives so much things to talk about that it could be endlessly fleshed out.

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