I haven’t Read it yet but im just gonna say thanks for Doing a warhammer fanfic because I’ve wanted one for a while But ill leave another review when i read the chapters you posted so far

Why would anyone want to be in that verse Its literally hell life there sucks stuff there is cool but super ****ed up the odds of ur death even with cheats is high u would have to be ridiculously op And the empire is xenophobic to the extreme.

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I really enjoy this fan fic because there arent many others like this, but the main thing that moves this down from being a super Good book is the characters. Especially the mc, he is to quote many others “Beta male trash” and it makes it very unappealing to root for him. He had time for characters devolpment when he gets betrayed by his favorite uncle, and instead of being more desceisive or ruthless, he stays the same and uses some of his cheats to get more loyal followers. Only other thing is grammer and spelling, author makes a couple mistakes here and there but ints nothing too big.

very weak already asking for an op system and wishes, would not survive in warhammer 2 seconds ..............,.................................................

This book is amazing, keep going!  Can't stop reading. Can't wait to see more. Do you have any social media that I can follow so I can know when you gonna update?

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