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Item: Last Avatar
Rating: 4.6

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myona_Lv114yrmyona_

The first three chapters are really captivating! Really excited to see more coming! I really love the imagery and dialogue! My only complaint is that there sometimes seems to be a mix of past and present terms, but it didn't bother me all too much. Keep up the good work!

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Honestly I have a good idea for my novel,but writing is swriously difficult. Well you could always improve. So I will try my best to improve and reduce my mistakes.

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myona_Lv11myona_

I can relate. A lot of things sound good in my head, but when I write it down, it doesn't sound as great haha The premise of your story and its fluidity greatly outweighs one or two grammar mistakes, so I still think your story is awesome!

Lord_Meph1sto:Honestly I have a good idea for my novel,but writing is swriously difficult. Well you could always improve. So I will try my best to improve and reduce my mistakes.

4yr