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Shameless author here!!! Pros and Cons of my own story what i think it is!! Pros: MC is op as hell. He do what he wants. He lives as he likes. Every life is considered an entertainment for him. Romance if present will be progressing slowly. MC is ruthless and a sadist Cons: Beginnig chaps are a bit short,but it will change as the story goes on. Grammer mistakes and small others also will be present. MC will do torture scenes in future.

Over all this novel is really good. You explain every details finely but this is your biggest weakness. If you tried not to reveal about Vishu Incanate and his powers first you can make your story much appealing. Why? Because it will make the readers more enthusiastic to find out about the secrets and power of the MC. But the plot was really amazing and well made. Continue your work.

This is a very intriguing story, and I rather like the world building. I haven’t read a lot of work with Hinduism as the basis to the fantasy world, and this one is written in such a way that I didn’t feel out of my depth despite knowing relatively little about the mythology. The main character, Xed is amusingly arrogant and definitely makes the story an interesting read. There are a number of errors in the writing, mostly punctuation and tense shifts, and then a switch from third person to first person. Most of it I think is just due to the fact that it is a first draft. After the story gets further along and the writer gets a better handle on what they’re trying to do and how to write this story, I think most the issues that stick out me can be fixed with a good editor and some revisions. I suspect English isn’t their first language, and if that’s the case, then I’m even more impressed by the quality and lack of significant errors. It’s an interesting read for sure, and I hope to see more updates. It will be even better with a little polish.

A good book finally in WPC section. Shows real promise. Try to continue after the WPC too. Exp exp exp exp exp ex exp exp exp exp ex ex exp

How annoying I wasn't logged in when I first made this review and it's gone; vanished when I clicked to post and it took me to the login screen. Anyway, I'm going to be paraphrasing my own review so it's not as coherent as the original. Writing quality: Small errors grammatically, easily fixed, mostly comma spacing. The author gets his point along clearly. I suspect the author is not a native English speaker and does very well considering, there was not one part of the story that I failed to understand. I won't comment on updating stability, to each his own. The author has good world-building centred around Hinduism, explains it quickly and concisely. The story is too short to comment on story development too much, but it's good so far. Author needs to be careful with the character development of the 'gods' they can't be too childish, cant feel empowered over what to them would be minor deeds.

The plot is new and refreshing. The author explained about the 4 periods(yugas) very well and about the God. I can't say much as the story is still in the fourth chapter. All i can say is Author is showcasing each chapter very interestingly. Guys you have to try this if you like fantasy stories.

Really decent start to a story that seems like it will be a stand out novel on this platform. I like the summary and it seems like a good specialization to be expected from this compared to others is the world building. It may take some time, but sometimes one must be patient in order to see a great reward. :) -The Sleeping Tadpole

Interesting read with minimal issues when it comes to punctuation. The chapter titles were creative too. Three chapters so far, can't quite judge the story development but it seems straight to the point so no worries. Paragraphs are not that lengthy and the world background was described greatly. I was able to picture them in my mind. I wish you the very best!

Well done, I love the concept of the story and your descriptions of the scenes. The plot of the story is very exciting and I will be looking forward to more. The MC seems very interesting and I can't wait to find out what you do with him. I like your writing style. It was a great read. Well done and keep it up! The spaces after commas, quotations and full stops were missing, I understand that it is probably due to some clash in the system. Other than this little bit of a problem, everything else seems very good.

Good start. There are some spacing issues within the quotation marks and some lacking punctuations in some parts, but otherwise, not really a detriment to the reading experience. Story-wise, I can't really say much since there's only three chaps. But the descriptions are colorful and paints a good atmosphere. Keep on writing👍

The first three chapters are really captivating! Really excited to see more coming! I really love the imagery and dialogue! My only complaint is that there sometimes seems to be a mix of past and present terms, but it didn't bother me all too much. Keep up the good work!

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Well, I can say that the writing quality of the author is decent. As Hinduism is mostly underrated, I'm pleased to see that there is a novel focusing on hindu mythology. The story development so far has been good and Yes, The world building is particularly interesting. The only con of this novel is that the chapters are short. While it wouldn't be that much of a problem when more chapters pile up. Overall Its a good book and needs some reading from the readers to figure out how the story progresses.

This novel is the most amazing novel that I have read so far! I was really looking for a novel that could bring me to the sky just by his words and sentences, but now I had found it! I love the novel! And I'm itching for more chapters! I want more chapters!!!

Awesome plot and world building. The Indian mythology is always underrated but you expressed that beautifully. Hope you continue the novel as I would love to read more.The action is just awesome.

Good novel! I really like how fresh the idea of this novel is and how you describe the atmosphere of the scene. Very fun to read and it made me curious to see what will happen in the next chapter! Keep it up!