Item: The Wound In The Stars
Rating: 4.4

Matthewj212Lv144yr

2020-08-25 14:26

The series so far is wonderful to read I myself would not have been so forthright with ancient tech , but beyond that I cant wait for the next few chapters .

The Wound In The Stars

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