Review Detail of Demiurge_Ohara in Rewrite! DC: True Power of Ancient Saiyan

your English suck, one that requires multiple checks just to understand the scenes, it breaks the immersion, and the execution is so-so, the idea is noise but so far generic.idk why people rate it so high. It isn't even that good. average at best, unreadable at worst. (Y? again, your English is horrendous. )