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Jubysleua
JubysleuaLv104yr
2020-08-23 06:47

I was fascinated by this novel from the beginning. The whole world is described with incredible detail and love, especially the sceneries, which are simply fantastic. You can easily imagine the most diverse situations and regions, despite how unrealistic they seem to be. Regarding the characters, I think the author has a unique trait since practically all of them (even those only mentioned in a few chapters) are valued and have their traits and development. Although many are annoying or hateful, they've their role and relevance in the story, which makes everything even more interesting. Still on the same topic, I want to give special emphasis to the MC and ML. Their personalities are contrasting and all the interactions are funny. It's beautiful to see their development, despite all the differences, and how they go from "travel companions" to "lovers". About the plot, I think it develops at a steady pace. There aren't big time skips or situations prolonged by hundreds of chapters without development, which allows you to appreciate the evolution of the characters and makes it easier to understand all the mysteries surrounding their world. I don't have a problem with the writing. It's good enough to get a smooth and fluid reading and it's very clear that the author is trying to improve with each chapter. Not to mention that I don't have the right to judge someone's writing with my bad English. In short, the novel is excellent and by far one of my favorites. I recommend it to everyone who likes BL and Xianxia. Besides, the author is very friendly and always interacts with his readers in the comments, which always encourages me to comment again.

Heaven's Gambit [BL]

ThirtyTyrants
4.8
141 Chs

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ThirtyTyrants
ThirtyTyrantsAuthor

Thank you so much for such a kind, and detailed review, I really appreciate your support since the begging of the story, and always look forward to your comments, which are hilarious and always filled with great insight regarding the chapter's events. It's the best thing as an author to have a reader as engaged as you. I hope you continue to enjoy the story, and what other trials and tribulations await Wu Yun and Lan Tian on their road to happy ever after. Thanks again, for taking your time to write such a comprehensive review, and I'm glad you don't mind it when I almost spoil the next chapter answering your comments haha. Also, your English is great, you're super fluent, and have every right to judge, mine and everyone else's English.

4yr
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LinShui
LinShuiLv4

The opening is great! We find out a ****y tiny bit of a background on how the two main characters ended up as beasts on Earth. We also get a hint that even though the master of faith was behind this misfortunate event, he isn't very proud or happy of what he has done. Very intriguing and entails a rather mysterious backstory. The writing quality is great. I usually steer away from 3rd person present narrative, but it fit well in this story and I didn't find myself being distracted by it at all. The descriptions are beautiful, almost poetic in a way and paints a vivid image as I read on. The two mc's are so cute, their chemistry is wholesome and I really enjoy the ******* between them. It keeps me on edge and wanting for more. :D Story development is carefully laid out and the world itself is surprisingly detailed. The author clearly put a lot of work and love into creating each scenery. I enjoyed it a lot. All in all, I really enjoyed this story, the plot moves in a steady pace and the characters are very charming in their own, sometimes slightly annoying/mischievous ways. (I'm looking at you, Wu Yun, stop flicking water in Lan Tian's face! Poor guy just wants to bathe in peace.) I recommend it to everyone who enjoys BL and Xianxia with an intriguing plot and mischievously adorable characters. I will certainly read on to find out where the story will lead the two. :)

4yr

bunlian
bunlianLv2

Omg im soooooo in love with the way u write out the stories 😭❤️ the plot is easy to understand and im literally deep inlove with the characters!! you don't know how much i cried on every chapter😂 the angsty is wow😤 Honestly this is amongst the best bl novel everrrr😝 im grateful you're alive author, you're like the gift from god himself 🤭 i really realllyyyyy want someone to make a manhua for this😭 the story is undyingly beautiful and a masterpiece!!!! Continue to work hard author🙆🏻‍♀️❤️

3yr
mrmrcia
mrmrciaLv10

Reveal spoiler

4yr
Alienated9
Alienated9Lv4

Everything about this book is good. The plot is intriguing. The main characters are adorable. The first chapter of this book got me begging for more. If you are into a great plot and humor, this may just be for you. I recommend.

4yr
Megakochan
MegakochanLv3

Hi hun. Did you drop this novel?☹If so, do you think you'll ever finish it? I planned on reading it sometime in the future, but I just wanted to mentally prepare myself for cliffhangers. No shame or hard feelings if you don't want to continue, I totally understand.

2yr
_Escape_
_Escape_Lv13

Super good read! The characters are interesting and the romance isn't cheesy. I really love how the story keeps you wanting more. I am super sad I have caught up! I can't wait to see what happens!!!

4yr
yiyuehua
yiyuehuaLv2

The writing quality is amazing - the story draws you in immediately with its fluid imagery and its steady pacing. We're taken into human world after a brief backstory (of which I'm eagerly anticipating) and if I'm to give an analogy, the fox and the dragon are like two grandpas trying to use modern smartphones for the first time. Their conjectures on human civilization are both amusing and headache-inducing on equal measures. I have not seen much grammar mistakes that detract my reading - which is wow, incredibly rare on this platform. It's very well-written and suitable for a fantasy-themed story! The dialogue flows just as well. The characters interact in a way that's not stiff. Their mannerisms and quirks are properly highlighted from their conversations with one another. I can tell apart who is speaking even without the annotations. I'd like to end this review by saying: I have decided to adopt Wu Yun as my chaotic child. He cannot be suppressed and poor Lan Tian is just going along for the ride, led astray by his contemptible ways (he's so lovable though I'm majorly conflicted). I also absolutely adore Jiang Tanmei, the haughty young master who is positively suffering by his antics.

4yr
Stup1d_mav3
Stup1d_mav3Lv2

Tuis story is fascinating and very intriguing. i love the writing. the aurthor did a really great job on this story. i really hope everyOne who reads this feels the same way

4yr
Nocturnal_Dreamer
Nocturnal_DreamerLv10

Thanks for explaining how did they end up as a beast. I'm not really a fan of having two main characters but you execute it properly. Good job 😊

4yr
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