I want to start by saying kudos to the author. it seems you have many fans. With a lot of positive feedback from what I can tell. so I don't really know how I feel about this one. I only made it to ch22 so far. I feel things are over detailed. Half of the chapters are just the "system" telling the mc his new abilities over domains/subdomains, spells, etc. It's just a flood of information, which makes it feel less like a story and more of a wikia page. but that could all be chalked up to my own personal taste in writing. Another issue I've felt iffy on was his alignment. honestly the first 20 or so chapters he doesn't feel like chaotic good. If anything he's along the lines of neutral good, maybe chaotic good. I've played years of pathfinder, and dnd 3.5/5e. With dm's who are pretty strict on alignment, and action correlation. but I thought hey start of the story maybe its building up. so I went through the comments, to see others view points on it. Seems like it does a total 180, The mc turns predominantly evil(based on the comments i read). then sugar coats it with some good actions. so to summarize up my questions are: 1. As the chapters progress from 22 onward. does it focus more on the story. or will it continue with the annoying banter with the "system" and the high amount of explaining each and every level up, new skill etc. 2.does the mc actually align with chaotic neutral. an individualist, who is all about freedom, doesn't abide by laws etc. or does he flip back and forth of evil and good. if I have some stuff wrong, or if things change please comment. I'm curious to see if its worth investing more time and votes. quality of writing is good 4/5 story progresses at a snails pace in the beginning 1/5 character design is interesting, but I find the intelegent system aspect takes away from the story.(my own bias, I find it annoying) 3/5 your updates seem quite regular from looking at the times. 4/5 world background i found intriguing and what almost makes me want to stay 4/5
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