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Dretno
DretnoLv32yr
2022-04-27 11:31

Could have been a great novel if not for the excessive explaining. The content per chapter is minute as majority is just the author explaining how the mc speaks, breathes, does stuff etc.

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That's fair. I also think I did overly explain a lot of stuff with this novel. I thank you for taking the time to share your thoughts with me though!

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Honestly I am completely baffled. The fact that this story hasn't taken off and made it to the top of the charts confuses me to no end. It's been a few weeks now that I've dedicated my time to reading this wonderful piece of literature. The past week of which I have given every single one of my power stones to thrust it up myself. And still it hovers at the bottom of the rankings despite it's perfection. So now I'm obligated by my moral compass to try to rectify that in what little way I can. Making a dreaded review. You know the thing most try not to do because it takes too much time or that some just bs their way through. But getting to the story now I can truly say it is an overall great piece of work. Never have I truly been able to say with all my heart that a story is so deserving of 5 stars on on 5 categories. With each passing chapter I find myself drawn in more and more to the MC's world and with rapt fascination I watch as he/it grows to understand himself/itself as both a young God coming into it's powers. As well as the choices these powers subtly have over him influencing these choices. The character is fleshed out. The background is fleshed out. I've yet to spot a grammar error let alone a spell check. The complete originality is so far beyond my scope of understanding how the author could even be releasing this not unpolished diamond in the rough. But already glistening and cut jewel of immeasurable worth on a daily basis. And sometimes multiple chapters. That it makes me truly wonder if everyone else is completely blinded by mainly crud stories that are going no where. Whose only saving grace is the boredom of the readers and their casual reluctance to even spot check the author for all of their inconsistencies. That we all have just grown numb to it. So used to sub par literature that when truly great works come our way we back out and squander our time entertaining these butchered tales. Well this sort of turned into a rant and for that I do apologise. But I sincerely hope that you give this story a chance despite what I've gone off topic about. I've done my best without spoiling anything. Just I give it a chance and maybe who knows you find as much pleasure in reading it as I have.

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