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Sithis1987
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2020-08-02 08:47

Change the title to "The god of manipulation, lies and necromancy tries to appear good by healing people(sometimes) " and then this novel makes perfect sense. That's like 70% of the novel anyway. Oh yeah also add the tags planet destroyer, apocalypse bringer, ruler of undead and zerg the swarm - how empires of insects rule the world. P.S the alignment of the mc is absurdly not balanced the story tries to make him appear neutral but he is definitely evil, at least that's how he appears to the readers. 70% of the story is spent on describing his evil deeds in detail from destroying planets, to manipulating, blackmailing, threatening others or indulging or promoting sin and corruption. but its cool cause "he now healed all living things in this world, so all the mayhem we red in detail the past 150 chapters is off set by that one line so we are back to balance baby." doesn't actually make the cut in keeping balance to the readers mind. Also the scene where children are run down by undead while fleeing on their lives on a planet that he obliterated all living things and turns everything into undead should not be presented to the readers and is not off set by him healing a goblins arm. P.S.2 i like the world building and the system that has been presented but it seems the author wanted to make the mc kinda dark and edgy, a little bit more dark than a dark hero which is fine in general but not when you want to create an illusion of balance. The writing is really good and the presentation is really good as well, the grammar is excellent.

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LucianoWrites
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Hi Sisthis! Thank you for your review :) I'm glad you appear to like it, and I'll take your comments into consideration. I think they're really funny and I'm glad you don't mind that this is a dark story. I really like dark stuff and I'm glad you shared your insights with me.

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Honestly I am completely baffled. The fact that this story hasn't taken off and made it to the top of the charts confuses me to no end. It's been a few weeks now that I've dedicated my time to reading this wonderful piece of literature. The past week of which I have given every single one of my power stones to thrust it up myself. And still it hovers at the bottom of the rankings despite it's perfection. So now I'm obligated by my moral compass to try to rectify that in what little way I can. Making a dreaded review. You know the thing most try not to do because it takes too much time or that some just bs their way through. But getting to the story now I can truly say it is an overall great piece of work. Never have I truly been able to say with all my heart that a story is so deserving of 5 stars on on 5 categories. With each passing chapter I find myself drawn in more and more to the MC's world and with rapt fascination I watch as he/it grows to understand himself/itself as both a young God coming into it's powers. As well as the choices these powers subtly have over him influencing these choices. The character is fleshed out. The background is fleshed out. I've yet to spot a grammar error let alone a spell check. The complete originality is so far beyond my scope of understanding how the author could even be releasing this not unpolished diamond in the rough. But already glistening and cut jewel of immeasurable worth on a daily basis. And sometimes multiple chapters. That it makes me truly wonder if everyone else is completely blinded by mainly crud stories that are going no where. Whose only saving grace is the boredom of the readers and their casual reluctance to even spot check the author for all of their inconsistencies. That we all have just grown numb to it. So used to sub par literature that when truly great works come our way we back out and squander our time entertaining these butchered tales. Well this sort of turned into a rant and for that I do apologise. But I sincerely hope that you give this story a chance despite what I've gone off topic about. I've done my best without spoiling anything. Just I give it a chance and maybe who knows you find as much pleasure in reading it as I have.

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