Item: Fall In The World Of Myths
Rating: 2.4

KnightShade420Lv134yr

2020-01-17 10:59

Cliche. If I had to think of a word to describe the story its cliche. The mc isn't very likeable. The writing quality wasn't bad but the word choice feels awkward and disjointed. Nothing really grabbed me about the story. Mostly the story tired me out fast.

Fall In The World Of Myths

EJBonifacio1221

Not enough ratings

56 Chs

Liked it!

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EJBonifacio1221Author

Thank you for the opinion you shared that'll help me improve my writing skills thank you very much.

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newthingsLv6

isnt likable ?

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KnightShade420Lv13

It's my opinion so don't take it too seriously. It's a hard quality to describe. It's the feeling you get of wanting the MC to succeed or the feeling of picturing you doing what the mc would do. I can't describe it better than that.

newthings:isnt likable ?

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