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Amogus
AmogusLv44yr
2020-01-17 21:58

Its alright but maybe use paragrhaps because Its really annoying to read 1 big block of text.......................................................................................................................................................................................................

Fall In The World Of Myths

EJBonifacio1221
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56 Chs

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Amogus
AmogusLv4

Paragraphs*

4yr
EJBonifacio1221
EJBonifacio1221Author

Thank you for the review, I will keep that in mind from now on

4yr
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armagedon
armagedonLv5

jajajajaja who the hell thought "Zero Cuaresma Del Mundo" was a Good name for an mc, as a spanish speaker myself this sounds so stupid, couldn´t you use a normal name in spanish like Monteverde or del Monte, which are actual surenames, i´m sorry, this is obviously over the top, and has no relevance, but i just had to make the remark, anyways i´m giving it 5 stars for laughing of the name.

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KnightShade420
KnightShade420Lv13

Cliche. If I had to think of a word to describe the story its cliche. The mc isn't very likeable. The writing quality wasn't bad but the word choice feels awkward and disjointed. Nothing really grabbed me about the story. Mostly the story tired me out fast.

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