I just read the first two chapters. Will read the rest later. The novel shows potential and I would like to read it further. When you are a tree, you can't do much. Everything is in your thoughts. The starting is not to my liking as it portrays gang rape. The girl survived but what about the mental trauma? In the first chapter, it is not hairs but hair. 2nd chapter, the years pass they don't climb. I am not the one to point out mistakes, but these you can edit, by going to the chapters page. Like I will do for the issues you highlighted. Mia can speak to the trees. This is a very good thing, not all can do so. The communicate with plants and trees is through feelings and telepathy. This fact had not been indicated and how she has this ability has not been shared.
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Thank you so much for your feedback, it is greatly appreciated. You are quite right! Years don’t climb, I didn’t realise this isn’t something that is said in English - whereas in my language it is often said in prose - thank you, I didn’t give this a second thought. I already dropped small hints in relation as to why Mia was able to talk to the tree, but it will take some time before the reason is revealed.
