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2019-09-22 07:54

I really like this storyline but I'm very sorry to say that I have to convince myself after every chaper to continue with it. English isn't my mother tongue either and I don't dare to say that my English is perfect but after almost 80 ch. there is simply no improvement regarding the grammar and this is really bothering me. That novel has the potential to climb up in the rankings if the grammar is fixed.

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