I get the first review nice :D :D Very good and immersive writing in the first chapter and provoking interest for more. So i give you a 5 star for the quality of your first chapter and for motivation. Looking forward to more chapters of your story.

The first chapter was pretty different and refreshing from a usual story.. It doesn't start with any of the usual drama, but instead it works shows us the struggles of a normal kid with an abusive father. The MC is unsure of himself, and doesn't have any 'cheats' till now, which means it will likely be an epic saga from of a child from ordinary to the peak. An inspiring story indeed..

finally, the time is nigh. yes, lord author, the final boss, will write a self-review. i know, shameless. for starters, i think that this has turned into a very nice novel. the pacing has been good and im liking how the characters are turning out. however, more than anything, i have been focusing on building a unique and interesting world full of wonder and a unique cultivation and magic system. thank you for reading

Story about the adventures of a little kind boy, named Saiph, through worlds in a tower. The story, so far, is about hardship with the confort of the distraction when learning about the world. Will Saiph achieve power enough to steer his own fate? Will he find a place to truly call home?

Writing Quality: 5/5 refreshing style, doesn't read like a basic 'see spot run' story but also natural and not someone going to a thesaurus every other word Stability of Updates: 5/5 like clack word, what a madlad Story Development: 5/5 perfect. I write this at around 20 chaps. Building a solid foundation and still fun to read. There may be a doofus or 2 may say things like 'too slow' but they probably struggle reading above 6 year level Character Design: 5/5 real characters with real reactions to relatable issues World Background: 5/5 seriously just read it at this. Well defined and detailed

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The translation is really awesome and the words used in portraying characters and their actions are also really good. Keep up the great work. Your novels are very interesting too

I quite liked this story. Solid writing. And a bit more descriptive than many other light tales. But it seems like the writer has dropped it. Too bad.

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